for In Stone11/21/2018 c40 Nagi
One word -Beautiful-
One word -Beautiful-
1/12/2017 c40 MorbidArtistLover
I will not lie, I felt disgusted and a great deal of sadness for Caia for the first six chapters (pages?). And then she grew on me and I felt like a mother watching her child grow into an accomplish young woman. Rowan...I only felt pity as vast as the universe for her. There was no room for anything else. Caspian was my favorite character. He fought so many inner battles on learning that he does not every thing that happens and came out a better person with a growing family. I especially love how the village started to believe not all enchantresses are evil. Thank you for an enjoyable story.
I will not lie, I felt disgusted and a great deal of sadness for Caia for the first six chapters (pages?). And then she grew on me and I felt like a mother watching her child grow into an accomplish young woman. Rowan...I only felt pity as vast as the universe for her. There was no room for anything else. Caspian was my favorite character. He fought so many inner battles on learning that he does not every thing that happens and came out a better person with a growing family. I especially love how the village started to believe not all enchantresses are evil. Thank you for an enjoyable story.
11/30/2016 c40 Guest
You write very well. This should have gotten more reviews.
You write very well. This should have gotten more reviews.
10/29/2015 c5 Guest
God, Caia is just wonderful- I've laughed more than it was appropriate at how badly she took her wish being granted. :)
God, Caia is just wonderful- I've laughed more than it was appropriate at how badly she took her wish being granted. :)
5/3/2015 c24 Incognito
I really enjoyed the beginning of this story but felt like the plot was rushed in around chapter 17. Perhaps its just me but I felt like the relationship between Caia and Caspian escalated too quickly after that. The ideas itself are really creative though and the worlds are really interesting. There were only a few spelling errors but keep on working
I really enjoyed the beginning of this story but felt like the plot was rushed in around chapter 17. Perhaps its just me but I felt like the relationship between Caia and Caspian escalated too quickly after that. The ideas itself are really creative though and the worlds are really interesting. There were only a few spelling errors but keep on working
4/26/2015 c40 ReaderWriter2000
I love how clever you were with that last sentence and your story was absolutely fabulous from start to finish. Thank you :)
I love how clever you were with that last sentence and your story was absolutely fabulous from start to finish. Thank you :)
4/19/2015 c40 Guest
OH MY GOSH PLEASE DO A SEQUEL! IDC IF IT IS JUST THEM LIVING HAPPY EVER AFTER I JUST WANT TO READY MORE OF THEM... THIS WAS SUCH A GREAT STORY!
OH MY GOSH PLEASE DO A SEQUEL! IDC IF IT IS JUST THEM LIVING HAPPY EVER AFTER I JUST WANT TO READY MORE OF THEM... THIS WAS SUCH A GREAT STORY!
4/13/2015 c37 Guest
Update! I'm so excited!
Update! I'm so excited!
4/11/2015 c36 Guest
Okay my anxiety for her is gone thanks for not making it too bad on her... now to Caspian and the execution of rowan!
Okay my anxiety for her is gone thanks for not making it too bad on her... now to Caspian and the execution of rowan!
4/9/2015 c35 Guest
What. The. Honest. Fuck! Why do this to me i swear you hate me oh my gosh update this now. And why do this to precious caia that is so awful... so is it going to be a time skip or something... Please let it be a time skip for caia... and not for Caspian but for caia... aww and now she is stuck with a baby too? This story better have a happy ending :(
What. The. Honest. Fuck! Why do this to me i swear you hate me oh my gosh update this now. And why do this to precious caia that is so awful... so is it going to be a time skip or something... Please let it be a time skip for caia... and not for Caspian but for caia... aww and now she is stuck with a baby too? This story better have a happy ending :(
4/9/2015 c35 ReaderWriter2000
Plot twist, but ohmygosh, I'm sure you know what this is going to do to us readers! Caia neeeeedds to be with Caspian! Needs to...and after just getting married...ugh, you are wonderfully evil!
Plot twist, but ohmygosh, I'm sure you know what this is going to do to us readers! Caia neeeeedds to be with Caspian! Needs to...and after just getting married...ugh, you are wonderfully evil!
4/7/2015 c34 Guest
like brittany spears said GIVE ME MORE! i just want to see if she is actually preggers or not... please let her be pregnant and dont make it sad to where she cant have babies i will cry my motherfucking eyes out if that happens and i dont like to cry and iff you make me cry you're a horrible person... but any way great chapter update soon!
like brittany spears said GIVE ME MORE! i just want to see if she is actually preggers or not... please let her be pregnant and dont make it sad to where she cant have babies i will cry my motherfucking eyes out if that happens and i dont like to cry and iff you make me cry you're a horrible person... but any way great chapter update soon!
3/16/2015 c25 Just Me
Can I just say... I LOVE this story! I usually don't like the whole damsel in distress who can't take care of herself, but I'll make an exception for this one.
Please update soon !
Can I just say... I LOVE this story! I usually don't like the whole damsel in distress who can't take care of herself, but I'll make an exception for this one.
Please update soon !
3/14/2015 c25 ReaderWriter2000
Oh! I love the connections you draw in this story and Caia's cooking in this chapter is probably my favorite. Way to go Caspian!
Oh! I love the connections you draw in this story and Caia's cooking in this chapter is probably my favorite. Way to go Caspian!