for The Sisterhood9/18/2022 c4 
6Darth Zannacross
Curious about what the ramifications of how this universe was created will be, excited to find out and hope we get those answers sooner then later.
6Darth ZannacrossCurious about what the ramifications of how this universe was created will be, excited to find out and hope we get those answers sooner then later.
9/18/2022 c5 38Starart152
Another interesting story for the myths. I love how everything seems like just a myth, without anything proving it is true with the way the story is written.
38Starart152Another interesting story for the myths. I love how everything seems like just a myth, without anything proving it is true with the way the story is written.
9/17/2022 c3 6Darth Zannacross
Vennia's Tower sounds like a rather intense place, hope the Sisters get to check it out some day.
6Darth ZannacrossVennia's Tower sounds like a rather intense place, hope the Sisters get to check it out some day.
9/17/2022 c4 38Starart152
This is an interesting universe creation myth with the death of one of the sisters while the other one created a veil to protect those inside the universe from the outside.
38Starart152This is an interesting universe creation myth with the death of one of the sisters while the other one created a veil to protect those inside the universe from the outside.
9/16/2022 c3 Starart152
This is an interesting chapter where we learn of the mysterious tower of Vennias that might or not exist. As for how she got lost or disappeared, that is a big mystery.
This is an interesting chapter where we learn of the mysterious tower of Vennias that might or not exist. As for how she got lost or disappeared, that is a big mystery.
9/15/2022 c2 6Darth Zannacross
A era of many queens, we will see if they live up to there names soon enough it seems.
6Darth ZannacrossA era of many queens, we will see if they live up to there names soon enough it seems.
10/6/2019 c1 19dmasterxd
Straight up, that was an extremely interesting start to a story. I’m already hooked. I liked how you gave each sister a core aspect of humanity (well and magic but that might as well be one as well in fantasy stories haha) as well as how they learned from those things to create an element.
And that youngest sister though...she seems crazy. Got them to stop fighting, then unleashed the fire anyway just so she could win. Or maybe she didn’t even care about winning and is just even crazier than I think. I know this was just a short little prologue, but it was still really well done, so I must tip my hat to you ma’am.
19dmasterxdStraight up, that was an extremely interesting start to a story. I’m already hooked. I liked how you gave each sister a core aspect of humanity (well and magic but that might as well be one as well in fantasy stories haha) as well as how they learned from those things to create an element.
And that youngest sister though...she seems crazy. Got them to stop fighting, then unleashed the fire anyway just so she could win. Or maybe she didn’t even care about winning and is just even crazier than I think. I know this was just a short little prologue, but it was still really well done, so I must tip my hat to you ma’am.
2/4/2018 c2 38Starart152
The story feels like a tales that is given without a piece of dialogue. Despite that, we start to learn who the characters were, as the sisters weren't not all that good and could explained why the conflict happened in the previous one.
38Starart152The story feels like a tales that is given without a piece of dialogue. Despite that, we start to learn who the characters were, as the sisters weren't not all that good and could explained why the conflict happened in the previous one.
2/4/2018 c1 Starart152
This is a nice introduction of how the world was created by the four queens, as it turned violent. The world was quickly destroyed and turned to ashes. It's clear that the origin story might be something to fear in the far future, as the end of the world could come back.
This is a nice introduction of how the world was created by the four queens, as it turned violent. The world was quickly destroyed and turned to ashes. It's clear that the origin story might be something to fear in the far future, as the end of the world could come back.
2/4/2018 c3 khan khan
This entire chapter I read in such an *epic* voice... Very powerful and mysterious writing style, great word choice and vocabulary, and a solid and consistent tone. Looking forward to the next chapter!
This entire chapter I read in such an *epic* voice... Very powerful and mysterious writing style, great word choice and vocabulary, and a solid and consistent tone. Looking forward to the next chapter!
2/3/2018 c1 6Darth Zannacross
Lets see, I don't think I checked this out yet. Ah, another primarily female story eh?
Sounds like this sisterhood became a dysfunctional bloody one, we will see. A nice hook, we will see how dark this gets eh?
6Darth ZannacrossLets see, I don't think I checked this out yet. Ah, another primarily female story eh?
Sounds like this sisterhood became a dysfunctional bloody one, we will see. A nice hook, we will see how dark this gets eh?
5/12/2015 c1 12Vio the Wandering Lover
Interesting start. I'm glad you referred to the sisters as queens and not goddess. It would have made the fact that they are so vain a little redundant. I like it when the powers that be aren't so perfect. Anyway I just started reading Orchid too so I'll be doing a lot of side reading this week.
12Vio the Wandering LoverInteresting start. I'm glad you referred to the sisters as queens and not goddess. It would have made the fact that they are so vain a little redundant. I like it when the powers that be aren't so perfect. Anyway I just started reading Orchid too so I'll be doing a lot of side reading this week.
2/17/2015 c2 13360pages
These names..I swear :) But regardless, you might be better of extending the chapter slightly so the reader won't be overloaded with information and names. I know you have to set up the situation and scenario.
As for the story itself, we already talked about it, but I do want to see where you take these shorter burst of chapters.
13360pagesThese names..I swear :) But regardless, you might be better of extending the chapter slightly so the reader won't be overloaded with information and names. I know you have to set up the situation and scenario.
As for the story itself, we already talked about it, but I do want to see where you take these shorter burst of chapters.
2/13/2015 c1 360pages
Well this is just a prologue, seeing more of the characters personality would help me be able to define what kind of story it is.
Well this is just a prologue, seeing more of the characters personality would help me be able to define what kind of story it is.