5/24/2015 c1 4Elsie Chen
This... is only 200ish words... and so amazing... how you so talented? This is terrific! If you were to continue on with this, I'd definitely read!

2/12/2015 c1 Chelber
*fist pump* Yeah for the police! The police are good! (says the cop's daughter)
They shaved her head? So they her in their company, then... I am interested in the story behind this story.