for A Nightmare12/28/2017 c1 Darkness
Beautiful. Just beautiful
Beautiful. Just beautiful
2/2/2016 c1 
69Shadowswept
I decided to check out your writing since you took the time to leave a review on mine. I enjoy poetry, and this is very good and unique. Love poems are usually full of happiness, so the trepidation and doubt in this one was interesting and different. I love the line about needing to shine bright and hot like your soul. That's an amazing way to describe it. I also liked that it ended in an optimistic tone. I hope you know, though, that the fire has always been inside you. It will still burn no matter what.
69ShadowsweptI decided to check out your writing since you took the time to leave a review on mine. I enjoy poetry, and this is very good and unique. Love poems are usually full of happiness, so the trepidation and doubt in this one was interesting and different. I love the line about needing to shine bright and hot like your soul. That's an amazing way to describe it. I also liked that it ended in an optimistic tone. I hope you know, though, that the fire has always been inside you. It will still burn no matter what.
2/27/2015 c1 17Bob Story Builder
Good writing ser. Found this poem interesting in that despair over ever being worthy but the love can only see the worthiness if explore. Powerful and beautiful with dash of hope.
17Bob Story BuilderGood writing ser. Found this poem interesting in that despair over ever being worthy but the love can only see the worthiness if explore. Powerful and beautiful with dash of hope.
2/27/2015 c1 21asblackassin
Reading this was...interesting. I'm not typically into this style of poetry, but I quite enjoyed it. My favorite line was 'I'd crumble under you like I've crumbled before'. I think it quite accurately sums up the fear of a repeat of the past that many people don't understand.
21asblackassinReading this was...interesting. I'm not typically into this style of poetry, but I quite enjoyed it. My favorite line was 'I'd crumble under you like I've crumbled before'. I think it quite accurately sums up the fear of a repeat of the past that many people don't understand.
2/27/2015 c1 134midnightmadlb
This is deep! I have felt this agonizing despair and I know my love is the only one who can pull me from it and end my nightmare. Good writing.
134midnightmadlbThis is deep! I have felt this agonizing despair and I know my love is the only one who can pull me from it and end my nightmare. Good writing.