for Ignorance is Bliss7/26/2015 c1 
69Shadowswept
Love is very rare, but it can happen more than once in a lifetime. You are still young, and I hope you will find love again. Beyond that, there is more meaning to be found in life, whether it be spiritual or helping other people. You make a difference in people's lives in so many ways that you're unaware of, big and small.
As for your poem, it was simple, straightforward, and it conveyed the pain of heartbreak. Good job on expressing your feelings. Keep writing!
69ShadowsweptLove is very rare, but it can happen more than once in a lifetime. You are still young, and I hope you will find love again. Beyond that, there is more meaning to be found in life, whether it be spiritual or helping other people. You make a difference in people's lives in so many ways that you're unaware of, big and small.
As for your poem, it was simple, straightforward, and it conveyed the pain of heartbreak. Good job on expressing your feelings. Keep writing!
2/27/2015 c1 21asblackassin
This poem is beautifully written. The lines that say 'than to suffer the pain of forcing yourself to live/when you are essentially dead' are possibly the best description of lost love that I've ever read, and the last three lines took my breath away.
21asblackassinThis poem is beautifully written. The lines that say 'than to suffer the pain of forcing yourself to live/when you are essentially dead' are possibly the best description of lost love that I've ever read, and the last three lines took my breath away.