3/1/2016 c5 3Fishfish777
Hey, this is kinda like my continuous cycle idea from Dolly Dolly! Awesome!
...great minds think alike...
Hey, this is kinda like my continuous cycle idea from Dolly Dolly! Awesome!
...great minds think alike...
1/31/2016 c4 Fishfish777
Creeeeeeeeppppppppppppppppyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Nice new story!
Creeeeeeeeppppppppppppppppyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Nice new story!
1/23/2016 c1 Fishfish777
Wow. I loved the addition of Dolly being "plump" at the end!
Is it "seeds of DREAD" you meant toward the end?
But aside from that, what a great opening story!
Wow. I loved the addition of Dolly being "plump" at the end!
Is it "seeds of DREAD" you meant toward the end?
But aside from that, what a great opening story!
11/16/2015 c1 1DarkestShadowSide
Hi :) This was an amazing, eerie chapter :D! I like how Dolly seemed to be a completely normal doll, but wasn't that at all. While I was reading over the end when the doll was in the girl's room, I imagined the first bit of the last line was in a cute voice until she said, "... I'm going to kill you" where her voice would turn dark and demonic.
[I'm sorry for the long wait to review your story, I actually forgot I even had a FictionPress account at one point..]
Hi :) This was an amazing, eerie chapter :D! I like how Dolly seemed to be a completely normal doll, but wasn't that at all. While I was reading over the end when the doll was in the girl's room, I imagined the first bit of the last line was in a cute voice until she said, "... I'm going to kill you" where her voice would turn dark and demonic.
[I'm sorry for the long wait to review your story, I actually forgot I even had a FictionPress account at one point..]
7/15/2015 c2 SophieBeaLouise
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that is so true though! Really makes you think... Creepily cool :D
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that is so true though! Really makes you think... Creepily cool :D
7/15/2015 c1 SophieBeaLouise
OMG I found this so creepy but AWESOME! Omg! Wow I need a minite to catch my breath! The build up of tension in this is perfect and the writing is amazing, you're sooo talented and soo gifted!
OMG I found this so creepy but AWESOME! Omg! Wow I need a minite to catch my breath! The build up of tension in this is perfect and the writing is amazing, you're sooo talented and soo gifted!