for Bella and Connor5/29/2017 c26 Guest
Awesome!
Awesome!
7/16/2015 c26 Nidchat
its tragic but still lovely ... I was so caught up that nearly 2 am, but I couldn't stop reading... then I googled about them... oh God ... I guess there couldn't have been any possibly happy ending since this story had so much angst that it couldn't and shouldn't happen to have a happy ending... some of the stories are meant to be like this... beautifully written and well deserving to read ... I can't justify if they were good or bad coz there's never such thing in humans... everyone has grey shades... light or dark but still grey ... thank you so much for writing this... I guess I would have
never come across such an incident if I haven't read this... good luck keep it up :)
its tragic but still lovely ... I was so caught up that nearly 2 am, but I couldn't stop reading... then I googled about them... oh God ... I guess there couldn't have been any possibly happy ending since this story had so much angst that it couldn't and shouldn't happen to have a happy ending... some of the stories are meant to be like this... beautifully written and well deserving to read ... I can't justify if they were good or bad coz there's never such thing in humans... everyone has grey shades... light or dark but still grey ... thank you so much for writing this... I guess I would have
never come across such an incident if I haven't read this... good luck keep it up :)
6/19/2015 c26 Taint.Revile.Elude
I always wonder how much of this is historically accurate and how much of it is your plot, so I'm wondering if B really had someone, kind of, looking out for her interests in the police department. I'm certain you'll let me know.
They know she's pregnant and they likely won't care—she's too deep in it now.
Mexico IS a better plan. Seeing ones family before leaving while on the run? Stupid. Completely. Also a youtuber, Connor? No, she is a wanted woman.
If Bella were enough to get Connor out of the life, he'd have done so by now. This is guilt.
Mama Parker. :'(
This is why premonitions aren't as great as they're made out to be. One would think Connor would have learned to trust Bella's random screaming by now.
The clock is slowly changing time—that's important to the story, isn't it? Yup!
Why did Bella get in the freaking car? Just ugh, she's dead and I'm glad, though she just HAD to last until the VERY END. Like, why?! Lol.
So that was BRIE Bella had a premonition of, eh? That's cool. I like what you did there!
Congrats on finishing this baby. :D What's next?
I always wonder how much of this is historically accurate and how much of it is your plot, so I'm wondering if B really had someone, kind of, looking out for her interests in the police department. I'm certain you'll let me know.
They know she's pregnant and they likely won't care—she's too deep in it now.
Mexico IS a better plan. Seeing ones family before leaving while on the run? Stupid. Completely. Also a youtuber, Connor? No, she is a wanted woman.
If Bella were enough to get Connor out of the life, he'd have done so by now. This is guilt.
Mama Parker. :'(
This is why premonitions aren't as great as they're made out to be. One would think Connor would have learned to trust Bella's random screaming by now.
The clock is slowly changing time—that's important to the story, isn't it? Yup!
Why did Bella get in the freaking car? Just ugh, she's dead and I'm glad, though she just HAD to last until the VERY END. Like, why?! Lol.
So that was BRIE Bella had a premonition of, eh? That's cool. I like what you did there!
Congrats on finishing this baby. :D What's next?
6/16/2015 c25 Taint.Revile.Elude
He's just a shell of a boy.
Oh, goodness, Bella, the only way you'd know it was a boy is if you'd seen it killed behind you and your boyfriend's BS. Neither of you deserves a baby because you can't care for it. You won't do what it takes to insure that kid a good life. God, they're daft.
Wow, Brooklyn's kids? That felt random. All I can think is it has to do with the source material so leaving it out wasn't an option. True?
Gah, I wish I HAD gotten that bit of foreshadowing. Alas, I have NOT seen a musical where that happens. I'm thankful, actually.
I can't get pissed at you—people die, even children. At least these weren't murdered in some horrible way. One too many documentaries have shown me exactly how horrendous folks can be to the most defenseless among us.
A) I love children! Small, inquisitive ones are my favorites—that unabashed thirst for knowledge is a thing of beauty.
B) No, thankfully! Songs were the only lullabies in my life but they played a powerful part. I don't know where I'd be, where I'd be going or how I'd get there without music. Imagine a trip of any kind… with NO music. *shudders*
One more chapter to go!
He's just a shell of a boy.
Oh, goodness, Bella, the only way you'd know it was a boy is if you'd seen it killed behind you and your boyfriend's BS. Neither of you deserves a baby because you can't care for it. You won't do what it takes to insure that kid a good life. God, they're daft.
Wow, Brooklyn's kids? That felt random. All I can think is it has to do with the source material so leaving it out wasn't an option. True?
Gah, I wish I HAD gotten that bit of foreshadowing. Alas, I have NOT seen a musical where that happens. I'm thankful, actually.
I can't get pissed at you—people die, even children. At least these weren't murdered in some horrible way. One too many documentaries have shown me exactly how horrendous folks can be to the most defenseless among us.
A) I love children! Small, inquisitive ones are my favorites—that unabashed thirst for knowledge is a thing of beauty.
B) No, thankfully! Songs were the only lullabies in my life but they played a powerful part. I don't know where I'd be, where I'd be going or how I'd get there without music. Imagine a trip of any kind… with NO music. *shudders*
One more chapter to go!
6/14/2015 c26 Cary
That was awesome! I feel really upset but also super... satisfied? I don't know I feel like if there was a different ending, it wouldn't be the same!
Awesome ending! I enjoyed this story quite a bit! :D
That was awesome! I feel really upset but also super... satisfied? I don't know I feel like if there was a different ending, it wouldn't be the same!
Awesome ending! I enjoyed this story quite a bit! :D
6/13/2015 c24 Taint.Revile.Elude
RIP Bobby Barrow.
I agree with Brie, nothing is okay. Please stop saying idiotic things, Bella—goodness! With everything you've been through, you'd think you had a clue. Somehow, you do not.
I know of at least two people who would have been okay with a cop casualty. Not saying they're right but… eh. The reporters got that wrong, right—Bella wasn't shooting at the officers? At least, I don't REMEMBER it that way.
Bobby isn't going to make it. It's impossible. They have to know that.
They really should give themselves up. They'll probably kill Connor on sight but Bella and Brie can live their lives out in jail. I know they won't but I WISH they would for Brie's sake. If they need to take a woman and a man, they can have Bella. Please, have Bella.
Ooh, is Bella dead? At this point I feel about her as I felt about The Walking Dead's Lori whose death was so satisfying to so many folks
Bobby surviving as long as he did with the injuries he sustained really doesn't seem possible. It's a bit like Bella being thrown, but that was explained and I'm hoping there is a real-world explanation for this, too.
Oh, New Orleans, you are gorgeous. I really liked Connor and Bella's send-off for Bobby and, to a lesser extent, Brie. Bella didn't ruin it by being herself, it was a good moment. :D
A) I liked climbing roofs as a kid. There weren't many trees in the city. When I finally got to some, I'd outgrown the habit. Now I'm allergic and you'd have to pay me to get me in a tree, lol.
B) Not yet! But I want to visit Louisiana period, I want gumbo! I want it authentic and I want it in a newly-made friend's kitchen. I want the smells and the experience, then I want the voodoo and that sinister beauty you can only find in NOLA. I wonder if I could buy a snake? How would I get it home? I know cats can travel by plane but…can snakes? What kind of medical treatment would that thing require?
Never mind. No snake, not one I have to travel with, anyway!
Can Bella and Connor—because I know that's how it's going to play and I accept it—please die next? Pleeeeease. Anything to do away with Bella. This is almost a prayer.
Be merciful. ;) lol.
RIP Bobby Barrow.
I agree with Brie, nothing is okay. Please stop saying idiotic things, Bella—goodness! With everything you've been through, you'd think you had a clue. Somehow, you do not.
I know of at least two people who would have been okay with a cop casualty. Not saying they're right but… eh. The reporters got that wrong, right—Bella wasn't shooting at the officers? At least, I don't REMEMBER it that way.
Bobby isn't going to make it. It's impossible. They have to know that.
They really should give themselves up. They'll probably kill Connor on sight but Bella and Brie can live their lives out in jail. I know they won't but I WISH they would for Brie's sake. If they need to take a woman and a man, they can have Bella. Please, have Bella.
Ooh, is Bella dead? At this point I feel about her as I felt about The Walking Dead's Lori whose death was so satisfying to so many folks
Bobby surviving as long as he did with the injuries he sustained really doesn't seem possible. It's a bit like Bella being thrown, but that was explained and I'm hoping there is a real-world explanation for this, too.
Oh, New Orleans, you are gorgeous. I really liked Connor and Bella's send-off for Bobby and, to a lesser extent, Brie. Bella didn't ruin it by being herself, it was a good moment. :D
A) I liked climbing roofs as a kid. There weren't many trees in the city. When I finally got to some, I'd outgrown the habit. Now I'm allergic and you'd have to pay me to get me in a tree, lol.
B) Not yet! But I want to visit Louisiana period, I want gumbo! I want it authentic and I want it in a newly-made friend's kitchen. I want the smells and the experience, then I want the voodoo and that sinister beauty you can only find in NOLA. I wonder if I could buy a snake? How would I get it home? I know cats can travel by plane but…can snakes? What kind of medical treatment would that thing require?
Never mind. No snake, not one I have to travel with, anyway!
Can Bella and Connor—because I know that's how it's going to play and I accept it—please die next? Pleeeeease. Anything to do away with Bella. This is almost a prayer.
Be merciful. ;) lol.
6/13/2015 c26 
21WafflesandUnicorn
Wait a second, I only counted five deaths. Bobby, Buddy, Jackie, Bella, and Connor. Who was the sixth? You said there were going to be so people to die.
Alright missy, let me tell you something. YOU ARE EVIL! I KNEW THIS WAS GONNA HAPPEN FOR A WHILE, BUT YOU'RE STILL EVIL! I HATE YOU! Ok I don't mean that. Yes, you are evil for killing Bella and Connor, but I don't really hate you. I'm extremely angry though!
21WafflesandUnicornWait a second, I only counted five deaths. Bobby, Buddy, Jackie, Bella, and Connor. Who was the sixth? You said there were going to be so people to die.
Alright missy, let me tell you something. YOU ARE EVIL! I KNEW THIS WAS GONNA HAPPEN FOR A WHILE, BUT YOU'RE STILL EVIL! I HATE YOU! Ok I don't mean that. Yes, you are evil for killing Bella and Connor, but I don't really hate you. I'm extremely angry though!
6/13/2015 c26 9SpaceUnicorn1831
No, it can't be over! I wish this story could go on forever :'( I need a minute *starts crying*.
I've never read/seen any Bonnie And Clyde movies or books, but now I really want to.
I am SOOOOOOO glad I found this story, because it has been amazing. I've loved it ever since I read the summary, and when I read the first chapter I knew I would fall in love with the story.
I don't even know what to write right now, because I don't wan to cry, and if I continue this review (the LAST review for this story) I might.
This has been an amazing story, and I've loved every bit of it. :)
9SpaceUnicorn1831No, it can't be over! I wish this story could go on forever :'( I need a minute *starts crying*.
I've never read/seen any Bonnie And Clyde movies or books, but now I really want to.
I am SOOOOOOO glad I found this story, because it has been amazing. I've loved it ever since I read the summary, and when I read the first chapter I knew I would fall in love with the story.
I don't even know what to write right now, because I don't wan to cry, and if I continue this review (the LAST review for this story) I might.
This has been an amazing story, and I've loved every bit of it. :)
6/13/2015 c11 Madz
This is an awesome story! It's written excellently, the characters are people with interesting stories, and everything seems to have been well thought out. I can't wait to see where you go with this. I almost feel like Bella and Conner are going to be the next Bonnie and Clyde ;)
This is an awesome story! It's written excellently, the characters are people with interesting stories, and everything seems to have been well thought out. I can't wait to see where you go with this. I almost feel like Bella and Conner are going to be the next Bonnie and Clyde ;)
6/12/2015 c25 Cary
Oh god O.O Three people are going to die in the next chapter o.o well okay I'll take the time between updates to mentally prepare myself.
This story is awesome though it's really kept me hooked on it! :D
Oh god O.O Three people are going to die in the next chapter o.o well okay I'll take the time between updates to mentally prepare myself.
This story is awesome though it's really kept me hooked on it! :D
6/11/2015 c25 3KimberleyStrawberryMacarons
Sad chapter...but still good... :D
poor Bella - have they got a child yet or is she still expecting...?
please update soon! :))
3KimberleyStrawberryMacaronsSad chapter...but still good... :D
poor Bella - have they got a child yet or is she still expecting...?
please update soon! :))
6/11/2015 c25 9SpaceUnicorn1831
Poor Buddy and Jackie :'(
This story is almost over? *cries along with you*
a) Yes I do. :)
b) I think my nan used to.
I may actually cry when this story ends, but I still can't wait to see how it ends! :)
9SpaceUnicorn1831Poor Buddy and Jackie :'(
This story is almost over? *cries along with you*
a) Yes I do. :)
b) I think my nan used to.
I may actually cry when this story ends, but I still can't wait to see how it ends! :)
6/11/2015 c23 Taint.Revile.Elude
They should steal contraceptives. Bella can't KEEP getting pregnant. I'm certain this is the last time—this story can't last much longer, right?—but goodness! Condoms, folks.
They get Bobby to safety, the irony.
Poor Brie, you may want to do away with yourself now because Bobby isn't going to make it no matter how long you all keep driving. They should have left Bella and Connor a day after they arrived—they're nothing but trouble.
Goodness, that was intense, and it's only going to get worse, I know.
A) Panera Bread—their salads, sandwiches, soups and teas are everything! Chicken Caesar is my life!
B) I have never been camping, city girl all my life, but I'm rural now and I think I'll enjoy all but the bugs. Sadly they are a huge part of it! So, bittersweet is how I think I'll carry it.
Congrats on another chapter out!
They should steal contraceptives. Bella can't KEEP getting pregnant. I'm certain this is the last time—this story can't last much longer, right?—but goodness! Condoms, folks.
They get Bobby to safety, the irony.
Poor Brie, you may want to do away with yourself now because Bobby isn't going to make it no matter how long you all keep driving. They should have left Bella and Connor a day after they arrived—they're nothing but trouble.
Goodness, that was intense, and it's only going to get worse, I know.
A) Panera Bread—their salads, sandwiches, soups and teas are everything! Chicken Caesar is my life!
B) I have never been camping, city girl all my life, but I'm rural now and I think I'll enjoy all but the bugs. Sadly they are a huge part of it! So, bittersweet is how I think I'll carry it.
Congrats on another chapter out!
6/11/2015 c25 21WafflesandUnicorn
You killed little children! You douche! This is upsetting me. Why must you keep killing people?! a) I love small children! Which is why I'm mad that you killed two of them! b) My mother told me that when I was a baby my Granny would sing me to sleep. So yes, someone did sing me lullabies.
21WafflesandUnicornYou killed little children! You douche! This is upsetting me. Why must you keep killing people?! a) I love small children! Which is why I'm mad that you killed two of them! b) My mother told me that when I was a baby my Granny would sing me to sleep. So yes, someone did sing me lullabies.