for Bella and Connor5/20/2015 c20 
9SpaceUnicorn1831
YAY! They're together again!
a) Yes I have. It was never for me, though, and nothing ever serious.
b) Yeah, I do. Mostly because i can put in my earbuds, listen to music, and just watch the world pass as we drive.
I just finished my end of the year tests today, and not I
m done for this year! :)
Here's some motivation for you...SPACEUNICORN1831 IS IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY, AND REALLY WANTS YOU TO CONTINUE WRITING IT!
Does that help?
Can't wait for Sunday! :)
9SpaceUnicorn1831YAY! They're together again!
a) Yes I have. It was never for me, though, and nothing ever serious.
b) Yeah, I do. Mostly because i can put in my earbuds, listen to music, and just watch the world pass as we drive.
I just finished my end of the year tests today, and not I
m done for this year! :)
Here's some motivation for you...SPACEUNICORN1831 IS IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY, AND REALLY WANTS YOU TO CONTINUE WRITING IT!
Does that help?
Can't wait for Sunday! :)
5/20/2015 c20 3KimberleyStrawberryMacarons
will he? Yeh i reckon...She's gonna get better right?
a)YES iv broken my collar bone, my arm and had my appendix out :D
b)Never been on one...oh wait- we drove to Scotland in 2010! Tht was pretty interesting! ;))
Okay... do well! i hate exams...
please update sooooon!
3KimberleyStrawberryMacaronswill he? Yeh i reckon...She's gonna get better right?
a)YES iv broken my collar bone, my arm and had my appendix out :D
b)Never been on one...oh wait- we drove to Scotland in 2010! Tht was pretty interesting! ;))
Okay... do well! i hate exams...
please update sooooon!
5/17/2015 c18 Taint.Revile.Elude
So the drama. Connor is dreaming, that much I got, I just wonder why he dreamt so LONG. I mean, goodness, that girl must be super good in bed or something because I don't SEE it.
Lie, Frankie, lie!
Johnny and Mama Parker, I adore one of them. ;D I'm certain you can guess which is which. Bella has been through hell, apparently. Is there any historical basis for this or was it your own design?
More dreaming. But this one had some basis in reality as Connor is out and about being an idiot. Honestly, just off yourself if it's all that. Of course that CAN'T happen but his stupid decisions and mercilessness are not cool with me.
Oh, Bobby, seriously? Pots and kettles, dude! You're hurting Brie all because you want to be a criminal but don't have the guts to simply go out and be one. You keep stringing her along, much like Connor and New York! You're no better than your brother so you shouldn't be giving him advice. You're both horrible to be involved with.
I'll keep my mouth shut on who I think is going to die and go with this instead, my WISHES: Bella, of course; Bobby; Mama Barrow. Those are the only folks I dislike enough to hope for their early demise. I almost got what I wanted but you snatched it away from me!
The Chosen One trope is one of my favorites! But I love Science Fiction and Fantasy so that's almost a given.
So the drama. Connor is dreaming, that much I got, I just wonder why he dreamt so LONG. I mean, goodness, that girl must be super good in bed or something because I don't SEE it.
Lie, Frankie, lie!
Johnny and Mama Parker, I adore one of them. ;D I'm certain you can guess which is which. Bella has been through hell, apparently. Is there any historical basis for this or was it your own design?
More dreaming. But this one had some basis in reality as Connor is out and about being an idiot. Honestly, just off yourself if it's all that. Of course that CAN'T happen but his stupid decisions and mercilessness are not cool with me.
Oh, Bobby, seriously? Pots and kettles, dude! You're hurting Brie all because you want to be a criminal but don't have the guts to simply go out and be one. You keep stringing her along, much like Connor and New York! You're no better than your brother so you shouldn't be giving him advice. You're both horrible to be involved with.
I'll keep my mouth shut on who I think is going to die and go with this instead, my WISHES: Bella, of course; Bobby; Mama Barrow. Those are the only folks I dislike enough to hope for their early demise. I almost got what I wanted but you snatched it away from me!
The Chosen One trope is one of my favorites! But I love Science Fiction and Fantasy so that's almost a given.
5/17/2015 c19 9SpaceUnicorn1831
He knows she's alive! And now he won't kill himself! :D...But the police still want him dead...Right.
Although I don't want it to be, something is telling me Connor is gonna die...I DON'T WANT IT TO BE HIM!...OR BELLA!...I'm calm now...I think.
Can't wait for the next update! :)
9SpaceUnicorn1831He knows she's alive! And now he won't kill himself! :D...But the police still want him dead...Right.
Although I don't want it to be, something is telling me Connor is gonna die...I DON'T WANT IT TO BE HIM!...OR BELLA!...I'm calm now...I think.
Can't wait for the next update! :)
5/14/2015 c17 Taint.Revile.Elude
Favorite Novel: Ender's Game which I started re-reading last night after trying to finish a particularly intolerant memoir. No news flash, I couldn't. Lol.
Envy?: Ambition—the kind that motivates a person to do whatever it takes no matter what it costs them. Those people get things done, lol, and I think we could all use a sprinkle of their moxie every now and then.
There was so, so much going on in this chapter. It wasn't too much but I recognized what you were doing—you were constantly asking the question, "what happened to Bella?" while leaving the answer for last. I saw it coming and I blew through this chapter, reading on and on where I usually stop and take notes, lol. I had to know what happened to Bella and, more importantly, the baby who didn't come up this chapter, frustratingly enough. You have got some explaining to do, miss. I fear that child will be a casualty. Breaks my heart.
Bella clearly isn't dead, right? She's the main character in this ensemble, is she not?
How will Connor get Bella back? Or will she go to him, will Brie help her stage an escape of her own? Luckily the next chapter is already up!
Favorite Novel: Ender's Game which I started re-reading last night after trying to finish a particularly intolerant memoir. No news flash, I couldn't. Lol.
Envy?: Ambition—the kind that motivates a person to do whatever it takes no matter what it costs them. Those people get things done, lol, and I think we could all use a sprinkle of their moxie every now and then.
There was so, so much going on in this chapter. It wasn't too much but I recognized what you were doing—you were constantly asking the question, "what happened to Bella?" while leaving the answer for last. I saw it coming and I blew through this chapter, reading on and on where I usually stop and take notes, lol. I had to know what happened to Bella and, more importantly, the baby who didn't come up this chapter, frustratingly enough. You have got some explaining to do, miss. I fear that child will be a casualty. Breaks my heart.
Bella clearly isn't dead, right? She's the main character in this ensemble, is she not?
How will Connor get Bella back? Or will she go to him, will Brie help her stage an escape of her own? Luckily the next chapter is already up!
5/13/2015 c18 Guest
Cruel cruel cruel cruel cruel!
Cruel cruel cruel cruel cruel!
5/13/2015 c18 EllaRose
Sorry I didn't review the last chapter. I was in a state of shock and only just remembered that I never got around to it. All the dreams in this chapter creeped me out. Anyway, I just want to show my appreciation for the regular updates and wicked writing :D. My predictions are: Connor, Johnny, Bobby, Brie, Mrs Barrow aaaaand Brooklyn. If Lizzie dies I'll cry. Just warning you :'). Anyway, my first exam is in 4 hours so I won't be reading for a while. I shall catch up in about two weeks. I look forward to the story x
Sorry I didn't review the last chapter. I was in a state of shock and only just remembered that I never got around to it. All the dreams in this chapter creeped me out. Anyway, I just want to show my appreciation for the regular updates and wicked writing :D. My predictions are: Connor, Johnny, Bobby, Brie, Mrs Barrow aaaaand Brooklyn. If Lizzie dies I'll cry. Just warning you :'). Anyway, my first exam is in 4 hours so I won't be reading for a while. I shall catch up in about two weeks. I look forward to the story x
5/13/2015 c18 9SpaceUnicorn1831
YES! Bella isn't dead! *starts happy dancing* But Connor doesn't know...Someone needs to tell him Bella isn't really dead, and they need to do it fast!
YET!? Who?!...I'll take a guess, because I need something to distract me from the fact that CONNOR MIGHT KILL HIMSELF!
Umm, let's see...I REALLY hope Bella and Connor survive, but...Okay. Maybe...I'm gonna say...Bobby, Brie, Hamilton, Mrs. Parker, and...Although I hate to say it...Bella and Connor...Those are the ones I'd guess would be the ones to die...
Although if Bella and/or Connor die I might actually cry...I'm serious...
...Oh! I almost forgot!...Great chapter! :)
But seriously...PLEASE update soon!
9SpaceUnicorn1831YES! Bella isn't dead! *starts happy dancing* But Connor doesn't know...Someone needs to tell him Bella isn't really dead, and they need to do it fast!
YET!? Who?!...I'll take a guess, because I need something to distract me from the fact that CONNOR MIGHT KILL HIMSELF!
Umm, let's see...I REALLY hope Bella and Connor survive, but...Okay. Maybe...I'm gonna say...Bobby, Brie, Hamilton, Mrs. Parker, and...Although I hate to say it...Bella and Connor...Those are the ones I'd guess would be the ones to die...
Although if Bella and/or Connor die I might actually cry...I'm serious...
...Oh! I almost forgot!...Great chapter! :)
But seriously...PLEASE update soon!
5/10/2015 c16 Taint.Revile.Elude
Yep, closure—that's exactly what they're going to get. Eye-roll!
The Barrows have so many children. But, eh, procreate!
You're not blood and you've been horrible toward him for Bobby's mistakes as if he MADE him do anything.
Seriously, what is it with guys and showing off their packages?! As if others just DREAM of seeing those things.
Well, sex fixes that…although I still don't understand what Bella was mad about.
I feel bad for Brie, as much as I don't like her, having to deal with Bobby the way he is, the way I fear he'll become. NOLA!
Pause: Lizzie is only FIFTEEN? Connor should be shit for ALLOWING her and Frankie to have sex under his (temporary) roof. I know, teenagers have always had sex and now they're making the beasts with two backs exceedingly earlier but at home with someone that knows better? Unacceptable! Then again, maybe Connor doesn't know better—not making excuses for him, however, because he absolutely SHOULD. Were I Lizzie's Mama, I'd shoot the four of them. Kneecaps only, but still.
Good girl, Lizzie—I can forgive your earlier trespasses. You're being careful, you're refusing to follow in Bella's footsteps, you're funny! Win win.
Seriously, Connor, grow up, you cannot have kids on the lamb! There are times when he needs to be hit with a newspaper or have his hands slapped—this is one of those times.
That was a cute moment between Bella and Connor, but he's selling her a dream and she's buying it. Neither of them thinks long or hard enough about things. It's almost like they express their legitimate fears just so the other can feed them BS that is just barely enough to cover how ridiculous things are getting.
Oh, hell, what is about to happen and why, exactly, is Lizzie lucky not to be going? I mean, I KNOW why, something horrible is about to happen, but I don't want to be surprised…
My brother gets the worst colds as well, almost always leads to a teapot pry infection, and I call him the outbreak monkey. He's the worst.
Oh, no, I hope everything is all right. Even though the emergency responders could be a bit of an issue to a carload of fugitives.
1) It must have been bad for Connor to react the way he did. I mean, putting Lizzie out even though he KNOWS she's sick? He must believe her being around him is worse than her passing out via her fever and being kidnapped by strangers. So, 8.5?
2) They have to be seriously injured. My curiosity is on Connor's reaction—did he leave them before or after they'd gotten help? Either way, it's self-preservation but one way is indefinitely better than the other. Goodness, I need to know under what circumstances he left them.
I've been wondering about that movie since you first mentioned it. I think Anna's cool, though, so I'll have to check it out. More than likely, I know who Jeremy is but I'm not certain. Professor Google is on the case!
Yep, closure—that's exactly what they're going to get. Eye-roll!
The Barrows have so many children. But, eh, procreate!
You're not blood and you've been horrible toward him for Bobby's mistakes as if he MADE him do anything.
Seriously, what is it with guys and showing off their packages?! As if others just DREAM of seeing those things.
Well, sex fixes that…although I still don't understand what Bella was mad about.
I feel bad for Brie, as much as I don't like her, having to deal with Bobby the way he is, the way I fear he'll become. NOLA!
Pause: Lizzie is only FIFTEEN? Connor should be shit for ALLOWING her and Frankie to have sex under his (temporary) roof. I know, teenagers have always had sex and now they're making the beasts with two backs exceedingly earlier but at home with someone that knows better? Unacceptable! Then again, maybe Connor doesn't know better—not making excuses for him, however, because he absolutely SHOULD. Were I Lizzie's Mama, I'd shoot the four of them. Kneecaps only, but still.
Good girl, Lizzie—I can forgive your earlier trespasses. You're being careful, you're refusing to follow in Bella's footsteps, you're funny! Win win.
Seriously, Connor, grow up, you cannot have kids on the lamb! There are times when he needs to be hit with a newspaper or have his hands slapped—this is one of those times.
That was a cute moment between Bella and Connor, but he's selling her a dream and she's buying it. Neither of them thinks long or hard enough about things. It's almost like they express their legitimate fears just so the other can feed them BS that is just barely enough to cover how ridiculous things are getting.
Oh, hell, what is about to happen and why, exactly, is Lizzie lucky not to be going? I mean, I KNOW why, something horrible is about to happen, but I don't want to be surprised…
My brother gets the worst colds as well, almost always leads to a teapot pry infection, and I call him the outbreak monkey. He's the worst.
Oh, no, I hope everything is all right. Even though the emergency responders could be a bit of an issue to a carload of fugitives.
1) It must have been bad for Connor to react the way he did. I mean, putting Lizzie out even though he KNOWS she's sick? He must believe her being around him is worse than her passing out via her fever and being kidnapped by strangers. So, 8.5?
2) They have to be seriously injured. My curiosity is on Connor's reaction—did he leave them before or after they'd gotten help? Either way, it's self-preservation but one way is indefinitely better than the other. Goodness, I need to know under what circumstances he left them.
I've been wondering about that movie since you first mentioned it. I think Anna's cool, though, so I'll have to check it out. More than likely, I know who Jeremy is but I'm not certain. Professor Google is on the case!
5/10/2015 c17 Guest
I hate you
I hate you
5/10/2015 c17 Cary
WHAT?!
WHAT hAPPENED WHAT?!
OH MY GOD!
WHAT?!
WHAT hAPPENED WHAT?!
OH MY GOD!
5/10/2015 c17 2Luti Faube
Awww how sweet, you liked my guess for the past chapter the most.
But, how not sweet, Bella is *supposedly* dead. She can't be though! I wanted a happy ending, you know. Maybe he ran scared, and forgot to check her pulse, or Frankie tried to help or Johnny's got her or...? She's just dead then. You're horrible. *cries*
2Luti FaubeAwww how sweet, you liked my guess for the past chapter the most.
But, how not sweet, Bella is *supposedly* dead. She can't be though! I wanted a happy ending, you know. Maybe he ran scared, and forgot to check her pulse, or Frankie tried to help or Johnny's got her or...? She's just dead then. You're horrible. *cries*
5/9/2015 c17 9SpaceUnicorn1831
WHAT!? How can she be dead!? Her name is in the title of the story!...*screams*...I think I'm okay...No I'm not *starts screaming again*.
Bella can't be...Please tell me she's just...I don't know. Is she 'Marvel Dead'? (that means that she's dead, but she'll come back if you didn't already know.)
Poor Connor. :( He thinks it's his fault. What's he gonna do now?
a) One of my favorite books is 'The Jerk Magnet' by Melody Carlson.
b) I really with I had more patience.
I won't kill you...Yet...I've never wanted it to be Thursday more than I do right now.
Aside from the fact that...I'm not even gonna say it, because I'm still denying it...Other than 'the thing', great chapter! :)
9SpaceUnicorn1831WHAT!? How can she be dead!? Her name is in the title of the story!...*screams*...I think I'm okay...No I'm not *starts screaming again*.
Bella can't be...Please tell me she's just...I don't know. Is she 'Marvel Dead'? (that means that she's dead, but she'll come back if you didn't already know.)
Poor Connor. :( He thinks it's his fault. What's he gonna do now?
a) One of my favorite books is 'The Jerk Magnet' by Melody Carlson.
b) I really with I had more patience.
I won't kill you...Yet...I've never wanted it to be Thursday more than I do right now.
Aside from the fact that...I'm not even gonna say it, because I'm still denying it...Other than 'the thing', great chapter! :)