5/9/2015 c15 Taint.Revile.Elude
You and I, we've got this thing about choosing identical names. I, too, have a character called Brooklyn. She's from a story I wrote years ago, though.

I don't know why I expected Brooklyn to be horrible. But here are some theories: Bella hadn't spoken of her, now here she is and I immediately thought she and Bella didn't get along. That could still be true, actually.

Brooklyn has children? Bella's never spoken of her nieces and/or nephews.

Mama Barrow is delusional, Bobby and Brie are fighting, and Lizzie Bear is up to something. Let's see what happens next.

Honestly, Connor, from my thoughts to your lips—and your finger.

They think Connor is the ONLY bad guy. Ugh. So glad Criminal Mind has cleared this up, lol.

Yes, Bella, do something to help this crime spree along.

I wonder if the youngest Barrows are somehow on their way to Connor. I wouldn't be surprised if that's exactly where they're headed—not that it's a good idea but I'm sure it's going to be entertaining.

So, only Lizzie is going—hmm. Or HAS gone, rather.

Aww, Bella and Connor's first real fight. At least it isn't over something silly, like juice. They haven't been together long enough for that, though, lol.

Lizzie's arrived and she brought with her Connor's smile! Nice. ;D

I'd wait as long as possible for my lecture as well, Lizzie. I wouldn't dare hang up on my Mama, though, ever. I'm crazy, not certifiable.

Bisexuality that isn't sexualized OR a big deal FOR THE WIN!

I think I like Brooklyn. So far, those Parker women, except Bella, are awesome.

That was a tough one for Bella, good thing Connor lives her enough to out aside their issues. A girl afraid of thunder shouldn't piss people off so often. What if he's just been like, "Screw her?" …lol.

Connor is a very cool customer, I don't know too many big brothers or sisters that would have been so chill, especially with a gun in hand. The temptation to shoot would have been too strong.

Hah, I've done that—woken up my SO in the middle of the night for, what I thought was, a grand idea. Or because I'd made pancakes for no good reason. That happened far too often, lol.

Uh-oh, Bobby and Brie are GOING to Joplin. This doesn't seem like a good idea. A teenage girl goes missing, okay, sure, maybe she's off with her friends plus school hasn't started. Two adults disappear, one with a full time job, and they have a brother/brother in law on the run. I think Bobby's just got the itch and he'll grasp into ANY reason, right or wrong, to see what Connor is doing, maybe live his life for a little bit.

I feel Frankie on the heat but I also feel Lizzie, plus taking pictures turned out to be too cute. She won't be with them throughout the spree—I don't think Connor would allow that, he loves her too much and doesn't want her life ruined.

I think this trip will cause the growing rift to split even more between Brie and Bobby. If you want to do crime, Bobby, leae Brie alone and do what you want because I iously you can't do both.

Not for much longer, Connor's one is surely running out.

I hope those two used a condom, otherwise I'll have to think of them as idiots for the rest of this story—and I like them! Please make them smart! Maybe they did use a condom, which Frankie had to go and get, and maybe Lizzie went with him, and maybe they were SEEN, and maybe that will lead to trouble for Connor sooner rather than later!

A) Lizzie. She's a cool gal. She was able to keep Connor's secret, she snuck away without anyone noticing and se isn't ashamed of er sexuality or the fact that she's a sexual being. Love her.

B) Crowds. I have social anxiety disorder and that comes with all sorts of BS, panic attacks for example.

This was a long review, lol.

5/7/2015 c16 2Luti Faube
A car crash? How dare you! Since you're so lovely to your characters though, I'm guessing the car crash wasn't that bad but Bella was too scared to walk back during the thunder storm since she's got a phobia of them.

5/7/2015 c16 EllaRose
I need to reread this when I get home because I'm currently in the library revising but OMG. So happy that they made up but a car crash?! I was not expecting that.
a) Presumably not too bad since Connor managed to walk back to the house and didn't seem overly injured.
b) i think Connor thought that Frankie and Bella needed to go to hospital and obviously he couldn't be around when emergency services got there so he ran. But they're going to realise Bella was sleeping with him and either she's going to get into trouble or the news are going to say he was abusing her :(. I'm not happy with Connor's treatment of my Lizzie!
Excited for the next chapter though.

5/4/2015 c15 SpaceUnicorn1831
There's only one word I can think of to describe this story...Amazing! :)
So, yeah i finally got to read this again today, and now I'm all caught up. I would've reviewed earlier, but I had dance.
a) My favorite would be Lizzie. Although Drew is adorable too.
b) No, not really. But I guess that's a good thing, right?
I actually kinda like Frankie and Lizzie together...(:
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

5/3/2015 c7 SpaceUnicorn1831
NO! Connor-...He can't-...Why!? He and Bella need to be together!

Shoot! It's almost midnight...Guess I'll have to wain until tomorrow to read the rest of what you have up so far...BTW, Amazing story so far! :)

5/1/2015 c14 3KimberleyStrawberryMacarons
Sasha.
Thought Connor had really pushed it this time! glad she loves him too much tho...
okay...so who the heck is Frankie? He seems alright...
btw - what year is this 'set' in..?

4/30/2015 c14 Cary
i love this story! :)
this is making me so anxious, though! i'm really worried about what's going to happen next! :)
a. very
b. hm, hard question to answer :)

anyway, can't wait for sunday! :)