
4/9/2015 c3 Sasha
cant wait 4 the next chapter... :))))
bet something will happen...please update real soon! :D
cant wait 4 the next chapter... :))))
bet something will happen...please update real soon! :D
3/21/2015 c2 Sasha
Plz write more! :D It'd be awss!
Plz write more! :D It'd be awss!
3/20/2015 c2 shinju asuka
Aww... indeed! I always think that male pov of romance story is really interesting. So far this is cute. I'm looking forward to reading your next update! :)
Aww... indeed! I always think that male pov of romance story is really interesting. So far this is cute. I'm looking forward to reading your next update! :)
3/17/2015 c1 Savannah Singleton
Great start. Absolutely you should continue.
I would suggest a divider between his thoughts and hers.
Also, with her thoughts you switch back and forth between "her" and "me". If the "me" is her thoughts, which I assume it is, you might want to distinguish that in some way.
I look forward to reading more.
Great start. Absolutely you should continue.
I would suggest a divider between his thoughts and hers.
Also, with her thoughts you switch back and forth between "her" and "me". If the "me" is her thoughts, which I assume it is, you might want to distinguish that in some way.
I look forward to reading more.