for Spellbound6/27/2016 c9 Guest
Are you planning to update? Hope you're okay! :)
Are you planning to update? Hope you're okay! :)
10/21/2015 c9 ser
Please update!
Please update!
6/11/2015 c9 Literater
So you've officially stolen my heart! I love this. It's beautiful. It's different. You're writing is amazing. I feel like there could be a little more descriptiveness when it comes to Olivia - not in "seeing" obviously but in what she doesn't see. Though I imagine it's a hard POV to write, and you deserve all the kudos for doing it. I'm so intrigued as to what is going to happen next. I know you only updated a few hours ago, but the suspense is already killing me!
So you've officially stolen my heart! I love this. It's beautiful. It's different. You're writing is amazing. I feel like there could be a little more descriptiveness when it comes to Olivia - not in "seeing" obviously but in what she doesn't see. Though I imagine it's a hard POV to write, and you deserve all the kudos for doing it. I'm so intrigued as to what is going to happen next. I know you only updated a few hours ago, but the suspense is already killing me!
6/11/2015 c9 Guest
I am truly enjoying this story. The characters for the most part show real depth and the story is damn cute.
Keep updating, please!
Lo
I am truly enjoying this story. The characters for the most part show real depth and the story is damn cute.
Keep updating, please!
Lo
6/11/2015 c9 
3TheClosetWriter16
Loved this chapter :) I get her sister is trying to protect her but does she really have to be so harsh? And aw, it was so cute how Wyatt snuck in when she asked. He really does have it bad haha
Personally, I don't think this story is cliche at all. Okay, sure it has this guy that seems to be a bit of a ladies man falling for this one girl but I haven't really read one that's much like this particular story.
Can't wait to read more :D
3TheClosetWriter16Loved this chapter :) I get her sister is trying to protect her but does she really have to be so harsh? And aw, it was so cute how Wyatt snuck in when she asked. He really does have it bad haha
Personally, I don't think this story is cliche at all. Okay, sure it has this guy that seems to be a bit of a ladies man falling for this one girl but I haven't really read one that's much like this particular story.
Can't wait to read more :D
6/9/2015 c1 poopeepoop
I dare say, this story is kind of cliché. But I love it. I am interested to read what is going to happen to all the characters in the next chapters.
I dare say, this story is kind of cliché. But I love it. I am interested to read what is going to happen to all the characters in the next chapters.
6/3/2015 c8 Beverly
Another great chapter :) As I've mentioned before, I absolutely love the chemistry (and the kissing scenes haha). That ending was a bit of a cliffhanger- I'm definitely concerned about Olivia. Can't wait to read more :D
Another great chapter :) As I've mentioned before, I absolutely love the chemistry (and the kissing scenes haha). That ending was a bit of a cliffhanger- I'm definitely concerned about Olivia. Can't wait to read more :D
5/31/2015 c1 Guest
Just so you know, your story description is such a run on sentence with too many commas. It's hard to get interested in the story when I can't make it trough the first sentence describing it :/ I'd suggest adjusting it...your reviews are positive, you could get more readers with the edit.
Just so you know, your story description is such a run on sentence with too many commas. It's hard to get interested in the story when I can't make it trough the first sentence describing it :/ I'd suggest adjusting it...your reviews are positive, you could get more readers with the edit.
5/30/2015 c7 Beverly
Amazing chapter! I'm glad to see interaction between Hunter and Wyatt haha. And to learn more about her past!
Amazing chapter! I'm glad to see interaction between Hunter and Wyatt haha. And to learn more about her past!
5/24/2015 c6 Beverly amethyst
'So it's gonna be forever-or it's gonna go down in flames'
I really hope that this doesn't end in disaster, I really love them as a couple already. And the chemistry is amazing :) And what a coincidence with their siblings haha
So happy that you updated :D
'So it's gonna be forever-or it's gonna go down in flames'
I really hope that this doesn't end in disaster, I really love them as a couple already. And the chemistry is amazing :) And what a coincidence with their siblings haha
So happy that you updated :D
5/15/2015 c5 serendipity
Please update soon! I'm dying for more x
Please update soon! I'm dying for more x
3/28/2015 c5 beverly
Yay loved the chapter :) I wonder who would do that... a character we've been introduced to, or maybe not? Hmm... can't wait to read more!
Yay loved the chapter :) I wonder who would do that... a character we've been introduced to, or maybe not? Hmm... can't wait to read more!
3/25/2015 c4 TheClosetWriter16
This is most definitely my favorite chapter yet. I love that innocent Olivia can have such an effect on Wyatt. It was so cute (:
This is most definitely my favorite chapter yet. I love that innocent Olivia can have such an effect on Wyatt. It was so cute (:
3/24/2015 c4 12fictionsymphony
I got really excited when I saw that this was updated. It's becoming a true favorite of mines. Curious as to how Wyatt I'd going to prove himself but excited to see how it goes along.
12fictionsymphonyI got really excited when I saw that this was updated. It's becoming a true favorite of mines. Curious as to how Wyatt I'd going to prove himself but excited to see how it goes along.