for Teal Dragons and Black Guitars9/13/2015 c7 
8http.thatrandomgirl
I just reread all of this and it's so so good! Literally my favourite story on here :D I really hope you update it!
8http.thatrandomgirlI just reread all of this and it's so so good! Literally my favourite story on here :D I really hope you update it!
6/3/2015 c7 3KimberleyStrawberryMacarons
hope you get better
really wanna know what Holly an Knox are up to...
please do update soon!
3KimberleyStrawberryMacaronshope you get better
really wanna know what Holly an Knox are up to...
please do update soon!
5/16/2015 c6 3KimberleyStrawberryMacarons
Hey!
please update! really wanna read more of this!
u didn't update in AGES!
:D
3KimberleyStrawberryMacaronsHey!
please update! really wanna read more of this!
u didn't update in AGES!
:D
4/23/2015 c6 Sasha
I so love this story :):):))
Wow she almost blew it though didn't she! ;)
please update soon!
I so love this story :):):))
Wow she almost blew it though didn't she! ;)
please update soon!
4/16/2015 c5 Sasha
Good chapter...please update soon! :))
Why is his mom funny abt girls?
Good chapter...please update soon! :))
Why is his mom funny abt girls?
4/15/2015 c4 Sasha
hey please post the next chapter today!
please u said u might! :D
hey please post the next chapter today!
please u said u might! :D
4/13/2015 c4 Sasha
Good chapter i like 2 :)
Holly's kind of different ae...she doesn't think very optimistically but then that makes it more realistic :D
yeh please update real soon! :)))
Good chapter i like 2 :)
Holly's kind of different ae...she doesn't think very optimistically but then that makes it more realistic :D
yeh please update real soon! :)))
4/11/2015 c4 Vanillatwilight
The reason why I'm posting as a guest is I'm too lazy to sign in... Mleh. This is vanilla twilight-you'll recognize the username from my first review. Okey. This chapter kind of threw me off until I realized it was Holly's POV. You should say "Holly" above the chapter or else make it clear immediately.
The interaction between the three kids is super realistic, I believe. Holly's narration quite effectively puts the reader into her thoughts. I like it and, again, think it's realistic. The chapter was kind of lacking plot-wise, but I'm sure the next will make up for it.
The reason why I'm posting as a guest is I'm too lazy to sign in... Mleh. This is vanilla twilight-you'll recognize the username from my first review. Okey. This chapter kind of threw me off until I realized it was Holly's POV. You should say "Holly" above the chapter or else make it clear immediately.
The interaction between the three kids is super realistic, I believe. Holly's narration quite effectively puts the reader into her thoughts. I like it and, again, think it's realistic. The chapter was kind of lacking plot-wise, but I'm sure the next will make up for it.
4/9/2015 c3 Anushree
Hey! If this is how write when you are cranky then go ahead and be cranky! good stuff! Or should I say, 'hot stuff'?
Hey! If this is how write when you are cranky then go ahead and be cranky! good stuff! Or should I say, 'hot stuff'?
4/8/2015 c3 Sasha
Hey really lookin forward to the next part!
please update! Like... soon...! :D
Hey really lookin forward to the next part!
please update! Like... soon...! :D
4/7/2015 c3 7vanillatwilight
I'm not going to yell at you! I like this chapter. Also, I totally ship Knox and Isaac just because Isaac is really hot and so is Knox and Isaac is cute. But then again, I am interested in Knox's and Holly's relationship.
Have you read Beautiful Creatures? This story sounds a lot like it... I'm not saying this isn't original, but Beautiful Creatures has the same premise.
7vanillatwilightI'm not going to yell at you! I like this chapter. Also, I totally ship Knox and Isaac just because Isaac is really hot and so is Knox and Isaac is cute. But then again, I am interested in Knox's and Holly's relationship.
Have you read Beautiful Creatures? This story sounds a lot like it... I'm not saying this isn't original, but Beautiful Creatures has the same premise.