for Burnt Hearts7/4/2017 c10 Tuuli
I was checking if you had updated Challenger and noticed it was gone. I was just wondering if you gave up on that story or are you polishing it or something? It's a shame if you dropped it. I was so invested to find out what would happen to the main character. On the other hand I also like this story and I'm glad it still remains here. You're very good at creating stories that keep you wanting more and more.
I was checking if you had updated Challenger and noticed it was gone. I was just wondering if you gave up on that story or are you polishing it or something? It's a shame if you dropped it. I was so invested to find out what would happen to the main character. On the other hand I also like this story and I'm glad it still remains here. You're very good at creating stories that keep you wanting more and more.
4/12/2017 c10 Celestialuna
I totally love this story, it's very well written and I can't wait for more!
I totally love this story, it's very well written and I can't wait for more!
5/1/2016 c9 Guest
Hallo there, I just read your story and I like it. It's well structured and I really would like to read more about Kaeli :-)
Hallo there, I just read your story and I like it. It's well structured and I really would like to read more about Kaeli :-)
4/3/2016 c9 Guest
Please continue.
Please continue.
3/17/2016 c9 
1Atticus101
Hello,
I'm Atticus. Nice to meet you. I stumbled upon your story and noticed you hadn't updated for quite some time which made me want to review and inform you that I very much enjoyed your story. It is a great idea, has very intriguing and developed characters and I wish to read more. I hope you continue to write and update it. It is great and I am sure I speak for more than just myself when I say that we would all like to know the mysteries of Kaeli's past, his relationship with Rhädes, and what will happen with Celsi. (Sorry I am so formal. I have been told many a time that I talk as though I was from the middle ages :)
Sincerely,
~Atticus Ravenstryke
1Atticus101Hello,
I'm Atticus. Nice to meet you. I stumbled upon your story and noticed you hadn't updated for quite some time which made me want to review and inform you that I very much enjoyed your story. It is a great idea, has very intriguing and developed characters and I wish to read more. I hope you continue to write and update it. It is great and I am sure I speak for more than just myself when I say that we would all like to know the mysteries of Kaeli's past, his relationship with Rhädes, and what will happen with Celsi. (Sorry I am so formal. I have been told many a time that I talk as though I was from the middle ages :)
Sincerely,
~Atticus Ravenstryke
9/22/2015 c9 3Stormshower084
I really like your depiction of Omegas in this story. Even when an Omega wolf has personality and wants to prove something to the alpha they have in mind they almost never have something special that would actually work in their favor. Kaeli really only has his experience with his energy going for him. I find this romantic setting really realistic (as far as supernatural fiction can be). Its an interesting story so far and I look forward to its continuation.
3Stormshower084I really like your depiction of Omegas in this story. Even when an Omega wolf has personality and wants to prove something to the alpha they have in mind they almost never have something special that would actually work in their favor. Kaeli really only has his experience with his energy going for him. I find this romantic setting really realistic (as far as supernatural fiction can be). Its an interesting story so far and I look forward to its continuation.
8/13/2015 c9 EscapingNovember
I reviewed your last chapter, I'm just too lazy to log in xD
Anywayyy...I was so shocked at Cinder's reaction to Celsi's pregnancy! I actually thought that she would let her stay in the pack and it would be fine, because it seems like she has been so calm and reasonable about other matters...but I guess I was wrong. I'm not sure what I think about her, now, or if she'll be a good character (on the good side, I guess, if you know what I mean?) in the future...
And I'm curious as to how Rhädes will react if he ever finds out about Kaeli being an omega with how he views them, plus that poor omega that he shoved off! I'm glad he did, but I would be so embarrassed if I were that omega! xD
Also imagining Kaeli and Rhädes hunting together...unffff, that would be so cute, I can't wait!
Update soon please!
I reviewed your last chapter, I'm just too lazy to log in xD
Anywayyy...I was so shocked at Cinder's reaction to Celsi's pregnancy! I actually thought that she would let her stay in the pack and it would be fine, because it seems like she has been so calm and reasonable about other matters...but I guess I was wrong. I'm not sure what I think about her, now, or if she'll be a good character (on the good side, I guess, if you know what I mean?) in the future...
And I'm curious as to how Rhädes will react if he ever finds out about Kaeli being an omega with how he views them, plus that poor omega that he shoved off! I'm glad he did, but I would be so embarrassed if I were that omega! xD
Also imagining Kaeli and Rhädes hunting together...unffff, that would be so cute, I can't wait!
Update soon please!
7/8/2015 c8 Escaping November
I just found this story and am completely in love. It's so hard (for me at least, I've read eeeeeverything) to find good mxm stories that I haven't already read.
Plus, I'm super picky with the stories I read, but your's is a.m.a.z.i.n.g.
I'm already completely infatuated with Kaeli's personality, because I adore characters who can hold their own emotionally and physically. He's already progressed so much as a character in eight chapters without the story feeling rushed, and I have no idea how you managed that. Your plot is original and intriguing, and I love how you didn't just incorporate werewolves, but other supernatural elements such as telepathy and empaths as well.
Love it, love it, love it!
Keep being awesome~
I just found this story and am completely in love. It's so hard (for me at least, I've read eeeeeverything) to find good mxm stories that I haven't already read.
Plus, I'm super picky with the stories I read, but your's is a.m.a.z.i.n.g.
I'm already completely infatuated with Kaeli's personality, because I adore characters who can hold their own emotionally and physically. He's already progressed so much as a character in eight chapters without the story feeling rushed, and I have no idea how you managed that. Your plot is original and intriguing, and I love how you didn't just incorporate werewolves, but other supernatural elements such as telepathy and empaths as well.
Love it, love it, love it!
Keep being awesome~
6/5/2015 c8 Alpharoyale
Yay! I saw that you had updated and it made my day! My favourite part was the 'sweet little omega' comment which just makes me want to cuddle Kaeli (though he would most probably try to claw my face off:( )
I love how the characters are developing and can't wait for the next chapter!
Yay! I saw that you had updated and it made my day! My favourite part was the 'sweet little omega' comment which just makes me want to cuddle Kaeli (though he would most probably try to claw my face off:( )
I love how the characters are developing and can't wait for the next chapter!
5/30/2015 c7 Anne578
Hello and thank you for your story. Engish is not my mother tongue and I don't write it very often so I hope this is somehow coherent. I'm hooked. I don't know how the story will progress. Kaeli is a really refreshing and powerful character and I look forward to learning more about him. Is he strong because he hasn't the prejudice others have about the qualities and limits of the different roles in a pack, because of his fear to be identified as an omega or because of his will to overcome the limits others set for an omega? I think all that and more - no one-dimensional character here :D And besides his need to lean on someone who can protect him, he is a really strong character. I don't know what I would welcome more - to read about the pack and the interactions of it's members (more, please!), about the relationship between Kaeli and Rhädes (more, please!) or about the enhanced werewolves and Kaelis past (more, please!). So ... regardless in which direction the story progresses I look forward to any update. My compliments for your story-telling and your characters!
Hello and thank you for your story. Engish is not my mother tongue and I don't write it very often so I hope this is somehow coherent. I'm hooked. I don't know how the story will progress. Kaeli is a really refreshing and powerful character and I look forward to learning more about him. Is he strong because he hasn't the prejudice others have about the qualities and limits of the different roles in a pack, because of his fear to be identified as an omega or because of his will to overcome the limits others set for an omega? I think all that and more - no one-dimensional character here :D And besides his need to lean on someone who can protect him, he is a really strong character. I don't know what I would welcome more - to read about the pack and the interactions of it's members (more, please!), about the relationship between Kaeli and Rhädes (more, please!) or about the enhanced werewolves and Kaelis past (more, please!). So ... regardless in which direction the story progresses I look forward to any update. My compliments for your story-telling and your characters!
5/26/2015 c7 Arillian
This story is Amazing. I love how headstrong he is. K won't give in just for anything. Just that way I like it, *insert evil chuckle here*
This story is Amazing. I love how headstrong he is. K won't give in just for anything. Just that way I like it, *insert evil chuckle here*