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4/7/2015 c1 13IronicPuppies
For your first story I think this is pretty great. I found it sad and yet hopeful, and felt connected to your characters. I don't think you need to describe a Coma as a "long, really long sleep" since I think most people know what a coma is, but otherwise I really enjoyed the piece. Keep writing. )

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