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12/17/2017 c1 19Ckh
The writing might be basic but it works in a journal entry form. I'm interested in how you take the MC through this grim setting. I'm a sucker for this style of story.

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1/10/2017 c4 Rocker on
Eh, who knows, she may be useful!
1/10/2017 c3 Rocker on
Please stop using language. Not cool man, not cool.
1/10/2017 c2 Rocker on
Maybe something burst out of the ground, and the manhole happened to land upside up?
1/10/2017 c1 Rocker on
1) Please don't use language to convey meaning, it's degrading. Just do what Marvel does, and do the #%&# *! $ thing. 2) Interesting to see it from a journal perspective. Got to be boring if there's just one person, so it makes sense to just write the important bits.
4/13/2015 c3 14Scott Pilgrim
This is definently some good stuff. I'm talking about the story, not the whiskey.
4/10/2015 c2 Deleted-Account-01010
Well I'm certainly interested in this story. I like it so far, though I'm afraid I haven't got much criticism of any sort to give at the moment. Keep up the good work!
4/9/2015 c2 Scott Pilgrim
Yep. This reminds me of Fallout. I like how he uses what his pa told him to survive post-ap. Liked the James Bond reference. Maybe we'll see what the squishy thing was? May e it opened the sewer drain?
4/8/2015 c1 Scott Pilgrim
Dude, great post-ap writing here. The way you describe his situation is great like Fallout. Btw, love The Clash. Keep writing and stay frosty.

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