
2/21/2023 c1 knockmeoffmyfeet
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12/17/2017 c1
19Ckh
The writing might be basic but it works in a journal entry form. I'm interested in how you take the MC through this grim setting. I'm a sucker for this style of story.
From the reviewing crusade.

The writing might be basic but it works in a journal entry form. I'm interested in how you take the MC through this grim setting. I'm a sucker for this style of story.
From the reviewing crusade.
1/10/2017 c4 Rocker on
Eh, who knows, she may be useful!
Eh, who knows, she may be useful!
1/10/2017 c3 Rocker on
Please stop using language. Not cool man, not cool.
Please stop using language. Not cool man, not cool.
1/10/2017 c2 Rocker on
Maybe something burst out of the ground, and the manhole happened to land upside up?
Maybe something burst out of the ground, and the manhole happened to land upside up?
1/10/2017 c1 Rocker on
1) Please don't use language to convey meaning, it's degrading. Just do what Marvel does, and do the #% *! $ thing. 2) Interesting to see it from a journal perspective. Got to be boring if there's just one person, so it makes sense to just write the important bits.
1) Please don't use language to convey meaning, it's degrading. Just do what Marvel does, and do the #% *! $ thing. 2) Interesting to see it from a journal perspective. Got to be boring if there's just one person, so it makes sense to just write the important bits.
4/13/2015 c3
14Scott Pilgrim
This is definently some good stuff. I'm talking about the story, not the whiskey.

This is definently some good stuff. I'm talking about the story, not the whiskey.
4/10/2015 c2 Deleted-Account-01010
Well I'm certainly interested in this story. I like it so far, though I'm afraid I haven't got much criticism of any sort to give at the moment. Keep up the good work!
Well I'm certainly interested in this story. I like it so far, though I'm afraid I haven't got much criticism of any sort to give at the moment. Keep up the good work!
4/9/2015 c2 Scott Pilgrim
Yep. This reminds me of Fallout. I like how he uses what his pa told him to survive post-ap. Liked the James Bond reference. Maybe we'll see what the squishy thing was? May e it opened the sewer drain?
Yep. This reminds me of Fallout. I like how he uses what his pa told him to survive post-ap. Liked the James Bond reference. Maybe we'll see what the squishy thing was? May e it opened the sewer drain?
4/8/2015 c1 Scott Pilgrim
Dude, great post-ap writing here. The way you describe his situation is great like Fallout. Btw, love The Clash. Keep writing and stay frosty.
Dude, great post-ap writing here. The way you describe his situation is great like Fallout. Btw, love The Clash. Keep writing and stay frosty.