for Life, that means...5/16/2004 c1 astro-traveling-angel
wonderfu! I truely love this piece and the way you strike out, it is fantastic!
could u pop over to mine and tell me what u think?
wonderfu! I truely love this piece and the way you strike out, it is fantastic!
could u pop over to mine and tell me what u think?
4/17/2004 c1 
4Midnight Auror
I like this poem, its very light and lifting. It makes you really look at your life and see that it was all worth it. Awesome work!
4Midnight AurorI like this poem, its very light and lifting. It makes you really look at your life and see that it was all worth it. Awesome work!
4/17/2004 c1 Jennifer
That was a pretty good poem. I liked it. It showed me that you understand mostly what life is all about. A little bit repetitive, but it does get the point across. Good Job!
That was a pretty good poem. I liked it. It showed me that you understand mostly what life is all about. A little bit repetitive, but it does get the point across. Good Job!
4/26/2003 c1 98hurtmushroom
Tolles Gedicht!
Da f? man sich gleich viel besser und motiviert! *g*
cio, hoellenwauwau
98hurtmushroomTolles Gedicht!
Da f? man sich gleich viel besser und motiviert! *g*
cio, hoellenwauwau
11/30/2001 c1 2sc333
Ich glaub du hast was wichtiges vergessen:
Life, that means dying!
Du mußt nur deine Augen öffnen und du wirst es sehen. Mit jedem Augenblick stirbt ein kleiner Teil deiner Welt. Wenn du das erkannt hast, kannst du dann wirklich noch glücklich sein? Frag doch mal einen Obdachlosen wie er das sieht.
2sc333Ich glaub du hast was wichtiges vergessen:
Life, that means dying!
Du mußt nur deine Augen öffnen und du wirst es sehen. Mit jedem Augenblick stirbt ein kleiner Teil deiner Welt. Wenn du das erkannt hast, kannst du dann wirklich noch glücklich sein? Frag doch mal einen Obdachlosen wie er das sieht.
9/25/2001 c1 Eria
cool. very good poem. i liked it.
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cool. very good poem. i liked it.
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9/1/2001 c1 capriangel not signed in
i really liked... no wait, that's not true. i really LOVED ur poem! it was so colorful and everything! i liked how you described life. this poem is just plain perfect!
i really liked... no wait, that's not true. i really LOVED ur poem! it was so colorful and everything! i liked how you described life. this poem is just plain perfect!
6/22/2001 c1 Miekka
I really like it. Life is as colourful as you express (never just black and white), an adventure and a challenge every day, bitter-sweet.
I really like it. Life is as colourful as you express (never just black and white), an adventure and a challenge every day, bitter-sweet.