6/15/2016 c32 1Du
I loved this one! So well written. The plotline was good, and Sarah was a fantastic main character. She had layers and was a normal human being, not shy about needing sex. Jake was so sweet, you could tell from the beginning he had been through something dark. And I loved Nina, she was fresh and normal. Thank you for sharing this story :)
I loved this one! So well written. The plotline was good, and Sarah was a fantastic main character. She had layers and was a normal human being, not shy about needing sex. Jake was so sweet, you could tell from the beginning he had been through something dark. And I loved Nina, she was fresh and normal. Thank you for sharing this story :)
7/25/2015 c32 Guest
I love this! Sarah is a refreshing female character - they're usually ridiculously conservative and refuse to have sex with any man who isn't madly in love with them, which isn't exactly realistic. Well done on seeing this through :)
I love this! Sarah is a refreshing female character - they're usually ridiculously conservative and refuse to have sex with any man who isn't madly in love with them, which isn't exactly realistic. Well done on seeing this through :)
6/22/2015 c31 passer-by
i'm in love with this.
i'm in love with this.
6/14/2015 c1 1BRia93
It is truly beyond me how you only managed to get 6 comments! This is very well written and extremely hot! It had just enough drama to make both characters damaged but not enough to ruin the storyline. I'll definitely be following in hopes of seeing more of your work. GREAT job and good luck for the future!
It is truly beyond me how you only managed to get 6 comments! This is very well written and extremely hot! It had just enough drama to make both characters damaged but not enough to ruin the storyline. I'll definitely be following in hopes of seeing more of your work. GREAT job and good luck for the future!
5/30/2015 c32 Guest
Really liked it :)
Really liked it :)
5/25/2015 c32 sheryl
I read like 3 of your stories is one night OMG I LOVE YOUR WRITING like those sex scenes *FANS SELF* holy shit you can write some pretty damn steamy sex scene. That part in outside his apartment where she gave him head *flutters and dies*. You need to write more. The world needs more of your awesome sex scenes WHEW.
I read like 3 of your stories is one night OMG I LOVE YOUR WRITING like those sex scenes *FANS SELF* holy shit you can write some pretty damn steamy sex scene. That part in outside his apartment where she gave him head *flutters and dies*. You need to write more. The world needs more of your awesome sex scenes WHEW.
5/23/2015 c32 SnoQueen
That was written so well! Loved the plot! Looking forward to reading more of your work like this.
That was written so well! Loved the plot! Looking forward to reading more of your work like this.
5/14/2015 c31 Dezari
I'm not ready for this story to be over! I can't wait for the epilogue, this is definitely one of my favorite stories on here!
I'm not ready for this story to be over! I can't wait for the epilogue, this is definitely one of my favorite stories on here!
5/9/2015 c31 Yollie
I cant believe you only have 1 review after 31 chapters! o.0 WTH?
Well, I'm not much of a reviewer either but this is pretty good, I must say.
When I first started reading it, it didn't fully grab my attention, but you write very well so I decided to still give it a shot (plus I also like the sex scenes ;]). It got a bit crazy near the end but I still enjoyed it - Well done! Your writing is almost flawless and everything was well put together. I also like the roles your supporting characters played, especially the best friends. Thanks for sharing your story on here :) Oh, and I'm looking out for that epilogue!
I cant believe you only have 1 review after 31 chapters! o.0 WTH?
Well, I'm not much of a reviewer either but this is pretty good, I must say.
When I first started reading it, it didn't fully grab my attention, but you write very well so I decided to still give it a shot (plus I also like the sex scenes ;]). It got a bit crazy near the end but I still enjoyed it - Well done! Your writing is almost flawless and everything was well put together. I also like the roles your supporting characters played, especially the best friends. Thanks for sharing your story on here :) Oh, and I'm looking out for that epilogue!
5/6/2015 c28 Bob
My God, came to this site for inspiration for a mystery plot for English class and found myself here, this is fucking unbelievable. You have some skill, you've got my at the edge of my seat here. Please, update soon, this is absolutely fantastic.
My God, came to this site for inspiration for a mystery plot for English class and found myself here, this is fucking unbelievable. You have some skill, you've got my at the edge of my seat here. Please, update soon, this is absolutely fantastic.