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5/23/2015 c1 19Anihyr Moonstar
[but your are not an island] *you

Other than that (which is what made me feel I needed to leave a review, but left me not wanting to *just* say that, since that would be unpleasant), I really love the vivid imagery and metaphors. Your poetry always flows, and I find it highly inspiring when my descriptions are feeling too flat. Good poetry in general has that effect, I think - the freedom to cut right to the most potent pieces of a written idea. Anyway, lovely job.

- Moonstar
5/3/2015 c1 97rust phoenix
This has such a wonderful rhythm to it. Your words rolls and ring and whisper like waves. It's beautiful and fits the emotion perfectly.

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