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2Bahaghari is GraciellaDee
Stanza 2, line 2, I think you have a missing word there. A happy musing about falling in love. Explore more as it may add a dramatic effect on your poem, for an artistic structure. Nice work.
2Bahaghari is GraciellaDeeStanza 2, line 2, I think you have a missing word there. A happy musing about falling in love. Explore more as it may add a dramatic effect on your poem, for an artistic structure. Nice work.