for never10/15/2018 c2 
36Anna Christie
"purr me a lullaby" is such a beautiful line. I don't think I've read that metaphor before. Metaphor... Am I using that word correctly? haha Anyway, funny you should use the word euphony, since that's what so many of your poems are to me. 3
36Anna Christie"purr me a lullaby" is such a beautiful line. I don't think I've read that metaphor before. Metaphor... Am I using that word correctly? haha Anyway, funny you should use the word euphony, since that's what so many of your poems are to me. 3
10/15/2018 c1 Anna Christie
Somehow, this piece breaks my heart. Your imagery is vivid and your lyrical writing style lovely as ever.
Somehow, this piece breaks my heart. Your imagery is vivid and your lyrical writing style lovely as ever.
8/14/2015 c1 25sprinkled clean
The very first line at once gives off something really strong. I felt that the rhyming in this poem seemed less forced than most poetry I've read which had rhyme schemes,-like it still had that free verse effect. Overall, the first two stanzas of this entry leave a bigger imprint.
25sprinkled cleanThe very first line at once gives off something really strong. I felt that the rhyming in this poem seemed less forced than most poetry I've read which had rhyme schemes,-like it still had that free verse effect. Overall, the first two stanzas of this entry leave a bigger imprint.
5/25/2015 c1 Nobody
Nice piece. I like the discreet rhyming.
Keep up the good work.
Nice piece. I like the discreet rhyming.
Keep up the good work.