for Toxic2/20/2016 c1 torixx99
I feel like you wrote my life story lol this happened to me exactly.i love this story you're awesome :):):):)
I feel like you wrote my life story lol this happened to me exactly.i love this story you're awesome :):):):)
8/29/2015 c8 Guest
Yeah you go Nia. Kane was such a fucking dickhead. He deserved whatever hurt he felt. God I don't think I've ever hated a character so much.
Yeah you go Nia. Kane was such a fucking dickhead. He deserved whatever hurt he felt. God I don't think I've ever hated a character so much.
7/8/2015 c10 cat10985
What!? I am sooooooo bummed! After all of that and they don't get together !? Kane was such a jerk the whole time! And I thought for sure he was going to fight for her even after she told him no! I think she would have eventually taken him back if he would have fought for her! And I am sooooo depressed now that they aren't even getting a second chance... Sucks.. Kinda felt like I was reading two different stories.. All of a sudden she is getting married but you can tell she is still in love with Kane and I think Kane is still in love with her but he doesn't want to be a screw up... Ugh... So not what I thought the story was going to be...
What!? I am sooooooo bummed! After all of that and they don't get together !? Kane was such a jerk the whole time! And I thought for sure he was going to fight for her even after she told him no! I think she would have eventually taken him back if he would have fought for her! And I am sooooo depressed now that they aren't even getting a second chance... Sucks.. Kinda felt like I was reading two different stories.. All of a sudden she is getting married but you can tell she is still in love with Kane and I think Kane is still in love with her but he doesn't want to be a screw up... Ugh... So not what I thought the story was going to be...
6/30/2015 c6 skye real
The angst in this story is extreme. At least mow she's voicing out her feelings. What she needs is a good time out with other friends. Her life is too centered around him that it seems he has a life and she's just a doormat for him. Then she complains that he has no time for her. She needs to give him a good dose of his own medicine... He's too selfish to keep her dangling ànd keep using her for better sex.
All in all both characters are flawed but she seems to be stronger than him. I dont understand why he keeps saying he has no choice but to stay with his fresh high school graduate girlfriend. ...
She seriously needs to have fun without him.
The angst in this story is extreme. At least mow she's voicing out her feelings. What she needs is a good time out with other friends. Her life is too centered around him that it seems he has a life and she's just a doormat for him. Then she complains that he has no time for her. She needs to give him a good dose of his own medicine... He's too selfish to keep her dangling ànd keep using her for better sex.
All in all both characters are flawed but she seems to be stronger than him. I dont understand why he keeps saying he has no choice but to stay with his fresh high school graduate girlfriend. ...
She seriously needs to have fun without him.
6/15/2015 c6 Bridget
Wow. This story is way too real. Keep going though.
Wow. This story is way too real. Keep going though.
6/3/2015 c4 beverly
Aww this is so sad :(
Aww this is so sad :(
5/27/2015 c1 
31drink me pretty
Whoa, that was steamy. I was fully immersed in reading it. I'm curious as to where this goes.
31drink me prettyWhoa, that was steamy. I was fully immersed in reading it. I'm curious as to where this goes.
5/27/2015 c2 Anya
Great story! So much angst & drama in just these first 2 chapters. Makes my heart hurt. I dunno if I'm prepared for more lol. Looking forward to what's next! (:
Great story! So much angst & drama in just these first 2 chapters. Makes my heart hurt. I dunno if I'm prepared for more lol. Looking forward to what's next! (:
5/27/2015 c2 3TheClosetWriter16
Great story so far :) I feel so bad for Nia (and Cassie too). No one deserves to have their affections messed with like that.
Can't wait to read more!
3TheClosetWriter16Great story so far :) I feel so bad for Nia (and Cassie too). No one deserves to have their affections messed with like that.
Can't wait to read more!