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6/28/2015 c1 8LorrahBear
Whoa, that was a very different ending than I anticipated!

There were a few typos here and there, but nothing major.

I enjoy how you broke up the formatting, swapping from longer, near paragraphs, to single sentance, to single word. Lovely job, and a very smart choice.
6/22/2015 c1 Sapphires blue
I really like this short story, very emotional and ...gripping!;)
5/29/2015 c1 3succboi
Yes! You wrote another one of these poem thingies! they are amazing! My favourite bits are the one word sentences. please keep doing these!
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