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6/6/2015 c1 64atalantea
I like the imagery of your poem. Very vivid and unique. Dandelions in your iiced tea stood out to me.

The end seemed abrupt. And somehow it felt like it didn't belong to the rest of the piece. But cool and incredibly cold nonetheless. Which is probably the point.

Keep writing!

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