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2/29/2016 c1 5Marjulie
What I saw and read was that of a very strong woman whose passionate about the world. It takes a certain amount of courage to speak up and to muster that courage all the time is appealing. To the world you may just be another girl, but if you had the ability to take in and not even be a just a little offended, it just means you know exactly who you are and what you're purpose is. What they're seeing doesn't even scratch the surface and there's more than what meets the eye.
7/1/2015 c1 7Lie Ono
This was interesting to her your thoughts about yourself in third person. Even though I don't know you personally, I felt like I learned more about you than a simple conversation would teach. This was well written, except you spaced in between a comma and a word. I certainly enjoyed this gem.
6/30/2015 c1 8LorrahBear
Well this was lovely, as well as a great idea for a writing prompt. I found the paragraph describing how she handles crowds to be a little awkwardly worded; maybe it just didn't flow as well as the rest seemed to for me. Nevertheless, this was lovely, and it is good that it was read.

I do find it ironic that we the reader are forced to understand her/you just as superficially as everyone else though, despite whether we want to or not, as we are only given one chapter. Try though we might!

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