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7/17/2017 c5 5Katie Grey
This is... such a lovely poem. I love works like this, that leave you for a while trying to figure out what they mean... I could guess, I'd probably be wrong, but I could guess that this is a collection of "letters" (physical letters, or maybe words or conversations,) that everyone wishes to receive... like truth... everyone wants that, but, hardly anyone gets it. That's my interpretation, at least. In any case, this is very thought provoking and beautifully written, good job.
3/19/2017 c5 Guest
you do know me though
2/15/2016 c2 16John-the-H-is-silent
I love what you have here so far. The chapter titled "wanderlust" really spoke to me, as I've had a somewhat similar experience, with a girl with larger ambitions than I could ever dream, but it inspired me to dream and live much larger. You're a very thoughtful writer.
9/6/2015 c3 8rchll
This one continues to build this character up, much like the last poem. I like the last few lines..."the beauty in your thoughts and intentions" really grabbed me. I'd like to see some concrete scenes between you and this character - perhaps an idea for a future poem. :) Thanks for sharing!
9/6/2015 c2 rchll
You do a fantastic job of building this character up into something bigger than life. I feel, like the subject of this poem feels, I could simply never measure up. I like the side notes in parenthesizes, it works well here.
9/6/2015 c1 rchll
I like how this piece, this letter, starts off with a question. The flow of "waiting and waiting and waiting" is lovely and really sets the mood of, well, waiting. Of time stretching on. The weaving of the word "waiting" throughout this piece continues the effect. I love how the poem starts and finishes with "the wonder on your lips"...it bookends nicely. Lovely job!
7/27/2015 c3 7crazykumquat1123
This is amazingly well done. There is just enough mystery for the reader's own interpretation.
7/3/2015 c1 64atalantea
Oh. It's sad. Loving someone with one foot already out the door. I love the third to the last line. And I like how you ended the piece.

Quick question, what's up with you and capitalization? :P
Also 4th paragraph says "more clearer" was that deliberate?

Those aside, solid piece right there. :)

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