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7/21/2015 c4 Guest
The "Previously..." section at the top is actually very useful - thank you!
7/8/2015 c2 retiredaccount1
This is actually pretty good. I would have liked to know a bit more backstory of the characters, as all the events seem really sudden. But, this has certainly caught my attention and perhaps you intend you return and explain the past in more detail throughout later chapters. Not too many problems with this story, I like it.

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