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7/9/2015 c1 8LorrahBear
This was very cute, although I feel bad for the girl in a way, because he only came back to her after he found out at the alter that his blond was already married. Still, I'm glad he finally found sense enough to go to her, and she got up the courage to act.

There were a few minor nit-picky issues, but I was most thrown off by your use of "oxymoron ". I'm not sure it was the right choice for this piece, and you would probably be better served by just using "moron," unless I misunderstood what your character was trying to communicate.

Either way, I really did enjoy this. Hooray for them!

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