for The Super Zombie Wondervirus Anthology11/9/2015 c5 
6Fractal Flaws
Your writing is so wonderfully angsty - it's a delight to read and agonizing to contemplate. Infinite like a well-written book is possibly my favourite line in the poem - great job!
6Fractal FlawsYour writing is so wonderfully angsty - it's a delight to read and agonizing to contemplate. Infinite like a well-written book is possibly my favourite line in the poem - great job!
11/9/2015 c1 Fractal Flaws
This is just wonderful. The poem is such a delicious mouthful - I read it aloud to myself to perfectly savour it. Great job!
This is just wonderful. The poem is such a delicious mouthful - I read it aloud to myself to perfectly savour it. Great job!
11/9/2015 c5 1mulrune
These are all beautiful pieces! My favorite so far is the lottery coin. Wow is that totally relatable! I hope you keep updating these as they're a wonderful read.
1mulruneThese are all beautiful pieces! My favorite so far is the lottery coin. Wow is that totally relatable! I hope you keep updating these as they're a wonderful read.
10/10/2015 c4 3TheClosetWriter16
It's interesting reading these vent poems. I think you write well (even though at times writers block feels icky) and manage to capture a lot into a small amount of words- something I have never been able to accomplish.
3TheClosetWriter16It's interesting reading these vent poems. I think you write well (even though at times writers block feels icky) and manage to capture a lot into a small amount of words- something I have never been able to accomplish.
10/5/2015 c1 9TotoDaDog
This is really good, and is often how I feel as well XD You did a good job of venting your frustration, I like it a lot. You might just have writers block though, happens to all us.
9TotoDaDogThis is really good, and is often how I feel as well XD You did a good job of venting your frustration, I like it a lot. You might just have writers block though, happens to all us.
8/24/2015 c4 97rust phoenix
I like the musical quality of this poem, and the way it looks on the page. The repetition works well and the last line is oddly haunting.
97rust phoenixI like the musical quality of this poem, and the way it looks on the page. The repetition works well and the last line is oddly haunting.
8/24/2015 c2 rust phoenix
Oooh, I really like this idea. May have to try it. You did a good job making a coherent and emotionally moving story from this exercise.
Oooh, I really like this idea. May have to try it. You did a good job making a coherent and emotionally moving story from this exercise.
7/12/2015 c1 8LorrahBear
I *LOVE* this poem. You do such a fantastic job of capturing the frustration of writers block, combined with the just crippling self-doubt that absolutely affects us all.
Fantastic.
8LorrahBearI *LOVE* this poem. You do such a fantastic job of capturing the frustration of writers block, combined with the just crippling self-doubt that absolutely affects us all.
Fantastic.