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7/14/2015 c1 43LuckycoolHawk9
I really liked the repetition of " but maybe in a year's time" because it does a great job of showing the mind of someone who is still in denial about who they are in love with. I also really like how you use dreams to show that this person is not truly fine because it allows us to connect to the speaker and makes us feel human. I also love the ending because it demonstrates a very human trait in all of us.
7/13/2015 c1 7Lie Ono
This reminds me of complicated grief for some reason... Great poem!

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