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7/18/2015 c1 13alltheeagles
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I'm like that, short as this is, I'm getting a plot. There's a strong picture of two old ladies, one of whom is perhaps getting a little senile. All that from 154 words - pretty impressive!

I also like that the two ladies have distinct personalities. Elza comes across as patient and forbearing, and Nellie as more high-spirited.

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