for A Second Chance5/30/2016 c1 AmRunrLuvr
This is a great take on an outcast's revenge! It was heartbreaking reading complete strangers commenting about her as she walked among them.
This is a great take on an outcast's revenge! It was heartbreaking reading complete strangers commenting about her as she walked among them.
5/26/2016 c1 
3mickeysowner
Very well written! I enjoyed the suspense you managed to include in such a short piece. Keep up the creative writing :)
3mickeysownerVery well written! I enjoyed the suspense you managed to include in such a short piece. Keep up the creative writing :)
5/23/2016 c1 66BlueSymphony
I like this one. It speaks of something that is all too common in today's society. So many people are overlooked and cast aside. I was one of those people in school. No one paid attention to me except for the occasional girl who felt like picking on someone that day. This was well done! You caught the scene perfectly. Great job!
66BlueSymphonyI like this one. It speaks of something that is all too common in today's society. So many people are overlooked and cast aside. I was one of those people in school. No one paid attention to me except for the occasional girl who felt like picking on someone that day. This was well done! You caught the scene perfectly. Great job!
7/25/2015 c1 8LorrahBear
Interesting and thought provoking. I really like how she got to hear everything her 'peers' were saying.
8LorrahBearInteresting and thought provoking. I really like how she got to hear everything her 'peers' were saying.