for Can't Stay Away4/20/2016 c1 Guest
Come on, you get rid of the on on except for the first chapter and then here where it said the story was uploaded theres only the first chapter. I mean seriously either update or put the other story back.
Come on, you get rid of the on on except for the first chapter and then here where it said the story was uploaded theres only the first chapter. I mean seriously either update or put the other story back.
1/17/2016 c1 Guest
You just ruined one of my favorite *Gilmore Girls* fanfics and took the story off ! Why?! I get that you want to grow as a writer, but trying to pull a Stephenie Meyer is not the way to go about it...
You just ruined one of my favorite *Gilmore Girls* fanfics and took the story off ! Why?! I get that you want to grow as a writer, but trying to pull a Stephenie Meyer is not the way to go about it...
9/7/2015 c1 
2lost0and0found
Your switch from ff to original fic is smooth and the narrative flows naturally. I agree with the other readers - you've grown as a writer.
It's a pleasure to take a fresh look at a favorite story (to me, CSA feels like a ff classic). I hope it gains popularity around FFP, too. It's a truly fun ride and always leaves me wanting to read more, so I'm looking forward to your next update.
PS: I will forever miss Tristan's blond hair but oh well, progress needs sacrifice, right? :D
2lost0and0foundYour switch from ff to original fic is smooth and the narrative flows naturally. I agree with the other readers - you've grown as a writer.
It's a pleasure to take a fresh look at a favorite story (to me, CSA feels like a ff classic). I hope it gains popularity around FFP, too. It's a truly fun ride and always leaves me wanting to read more, so I'm looking forward to your next update.
PS: I will forever miss Tristan's blond hair but oh well, progress needs sacrifice, right? :D
8/14/2015 c1 LSnyd
Loved it! Your growth as a writer is evident throughout this chapter. I enjoyed the variations from the GG version. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this story.
Loved it! Your growth as a writer is evident throughout this chapter. I enjoyed the variations from the GG version. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this story.
8/2/2015 c1 krw77581
Obsessed with this story on ffn! Can't wait to see what you'll do with it now! :)
Obsessed with this story on ffn! Can't wait to see what you'll do with it now! :)
7/31/2015 c1 alaskanbackdoor
You've stepped this up a bit! I think I am going to like the rewrite very much. The new characters are great.
You've stepped this up a bit! I think I am going to like the rewrite very much. The new characters are great.
7/30/2015 c1 JennySolvesky
LOVE
LOVE
7/27/2015 c1 xoa
Whoa. This is crazy. I love how Emma's smart mouth just keeps getting the best of her-JUST LIKE ME-and her sarcasm and TRISTAN and cinnamon buns :) Please update!
Whoa. This is crazy. I love how Emma's smart mouth just keeps getting the best of her-JUST LIKE ME-and her sarcasm and TRISTAN and cinnamon buns :) Please update!
7/27/2015 c1 erdi99
I very much like it. But why did you not change the name of the main male character too?
I very much like it. But why did you not change the name of the main male character too?
7/26/2015 c1 2Clouded and Instincts
I'm loving it so far. I can't wait for more. Out of curiosity where is the fanfiction iths is based on?
2Clouded and InstinctsI'm loving it so far. I can't wait for more. Out of curiosity where is the fanfiction iths is based on?
7/26/2015 c1 1EasilyDamaged
Oh babe! This is honestly looking so much better than CSA already. The sentense structure / the new female lead is way more entertaining. I'm eager to see her have a completely different backstory than Rory did.
How come you chose to keep the name Tristan? Although I love it - I was a bit surprised.
Oh and the use of Princess? Gah that nickname reminds me of my ship. Love that.
1EasilyDamagedOh babe! This is honestly looking so much better than CSA already. The sentense structure / the new female lead is way more entertaining. I'm eager to see her have a completely different backstory than Rory did.
How come you chose to keep the name Tristan? Although I love it - I was a bit surprised.
Oh and the use of Princess? Gah that nickname reminds me of my ship. Love that.
7/25/2015 c1 tuyaymia
Please update soon! I'm already hooked and look forward to the next chapter...don't wait too long to post it! I'd love to follow your story for the rest of this summer!
Please update soon! I'm already hooked and look forward to the next chapter...don't wait too long to post it! I'd love to follow your story for the rest of this summer!
7/25/2015 c1 9someclarafication
Duuuuude that was seriously suspenseful, A hooking chapter, and I can't wait to see what's next!
~Clara
9someclaraficationDuuuuude that was seriously suspenseful, A hooking chapter, and I can't wait to see what's next!
~Clara