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10Kenji-Kitsune
Somewhat of an emotional roller coaster for me. I did enjoy it, oh I did indeed. I think that this has a lot more room for maybe even a story! A great entrance that's for sure. I really think you can make this into something that could become a great story to read. Love the poetry, even if it was short. Almost reminds me of many other things that have happened in my own life, very interactive with real life aspects. Potential for Romance and Drama! in my opinion.
I should stop rambling now, everything I said is the truth! Hope this helped!
-Kenji Kitsune.
10Kenji-KitsuneSomewhat of an emotional roller coaster for me. I did enjoy it, oh I did indeed. I think that this has a lot more room for maybe even a story! A great entrance that's for sure. I really think you can make this into something that could become a great story to read. Love the poetry, even if it was short. Almost reminds me of many other things that have happened in my own life, very interactive with real life aspects. Potential for Romance and Drama! in my opinion.
I should stop rambling now, everything I said is the truth! Hope this helped!
-Kenji Kitsune.