for Caught1/16/2022 c1 raesi01
Hi.. I like your novel and I wanna give you an offer that related to your work. Would you mind give me your email to discuss the details further
Hi.. I like your novel and I wanna give you an offer that related to your work. Would you mind give me your email to discuss the details further
8/3/2015 c2 
13360pages
Once again feels really fast, in the weird way. Usually the first chapter or so is used as set up for the events following. This chapter feels weird in a way that certain things should get focused on above other things.
13360pagesOnce again feels really fast, in the weird way. Usually the first chapter or so is used as set up for the events following. This chapter feels weird in a way that certain things should get focused on above other things.
7/29/2015 c1 360pages
A lot going on just from the description alone, which is fine. I do wonder where this story is going to head since the first chapter doesn't really set the tone for anything, is it going to be light.
A lot going on just from the description alone, which is fine. I do wonder where this story is going to head since the first chapter doesn't really set the tone for anything, is it going to be light.