for Muddled Love1/27/2017 c25 Guest
Sequel I want to read a sequel to this story! :)
Sequel I want to read a sequel to this story! :)
1/24/2017 c22 Guest
Ok Zain is this close to going to jail and if there's going to be something sad in the next chapter then I'm going to cry. I want Lucien and Gemma to stay together no matter the obstacles and a few idiots because they belong together!
Ok Zain is this close to going to jail and if there's going to be something sad in the next chapter then I'm going to cry. I want Lucien and Gemma to stay together no matter the obstacles and a few idiots because they belong together!
1/24/2017 c22 Fancyandwhimsy
Yay! She might end up with neither! That would be the best for me. They are both bad news. She's way better than both of them. When this is all over, she should call the father and get a job with the Von Altdorf company to live an independent life
Yay! She might end up with neither! That would be the best for me. They are both bad news. She's way better than both of them. When this is all over, she should call the father and get a job with the Von Altdorf company to live an independent life
1/22/2017 c21 Huest
Thank you Gemma for hitting Bennett the dull boring jerk where it hurts! i was so happy about this he got what he deserved plus try to kiss Gemma oh boy I bet Lucien will give Bennett a good il punch to the face real soon.
Thank you Gemma for hitting Bennett the dull boring jerk where it hurts! i was so happy about this he got what he deserved plus try to kiss Gemma oh boy I bet Lucien will give Bennett a good il punch to the face real soon.
1/17/2017 c20 Guest
I'm rooting for Gemma and Lucien there so adorable :)
I'm rooting for Gemma and Lucien there so adorable :)
1/16/2017 c19 Guest
Please tell me will you have a chapter of Gemma telling off miss high and mighty skank Danielle and add a smack to the face? I'm sorry but she's so fucking annoying pardon my language plus Bennett he's a fickle I mean he's clearly jealous yet he thinks of Gemma as a sister I just want to punch him for being so uuuuggggghhhh! DX
Please tell me will you have a chapter of Gemma telling off miss high and mighty skank Danielle and add a smack to the face? I'm sorry but she's so fucking annoying pardon my language plus Bennett he's a fickle I mean he's clearly jealous yet he thinks of Gemma as a sister I just want to punch him for being so uuuuggggghhhh! DX
1/12/2017 c17 Guest
OMG I THOUGHT YOU HAD ABANDONED US (L) I'm so glad that you haven't!
*sigh* I think this is the third time I've reread this and I can't help but melt each time ~
Can't wait to see Bennett grovel at her feet while Gem rides into the sunset with Lucien haha
Can't wait to read more, sending lots of love xo
OMG I THOUGHT YOU HAD ABANDONED US (L) I'm so glad that you haven't!
*sigh* I think this is the third time I've reread this and I can't help but melt each time ~
Can't wait to see Bennett grovel at her feet while Gem rides into the sunset with Lucien haha
Can't wait to read more, sending lots of love xo
10/29/2016 c13 Guest
Bennett needs to see that Gemma isn't a little girl I mean seriously he's soo boring! Plus Lucien and Gemma moments are so cute!
Bennett needs to see that Gemma isn't a little girl I mean seriously he's soo boring! Plus Lucien and Gemma moments are so cute!
7/13/2016 c16 
1Moriah98
Lucien Lucien... Just tell her already! Sure, she'll be shocked, but I'm sure she will love you anyway!
Anyway.. Another great story that I have just binge-read! :) I like Lucien heaps, especially when they were at that hotel ;)
Great writing, can't wait to see where this one ends up :)
1Moriah98Lucien Lucien... Just tell her already! Sure, she'll be shocked, but I'm sure she will love you anyway!
Anyway.. Another great story that I have just binge-read! :) I like Lucien heaps, especially when they were at that hotel ;)
Great writing, can't wait to see where this one ends up :)
8/18/2015 c4 darkgurl92
Gosh, I feel the pain gemma is going through. Update soon. Stupid Bennett. I can't wait until Lucien and gemma kiss though, I know it's coming up :)
Gosh, I feel the pain gemma is going through. Update soon. Stupid Bennett. I can't wait until Lucien and gemma kiss though, I know it's coming up :)
8/7/2015 c3 kktalk123katherine
I want to read more! My heart always has a sense of anxiety whenever an amazing story like this isn't finished yet. I guess that's the down side of reading stuff in installments. Write more soon. You are an amazing writer.
I want to read more! My heart always has a sense of anxiety whenever an amazing story like this isn't finished yet. I guess that's the down side of reading stuff in installments. Write more soon. You are an amazing writer.