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for the fears lies in me

9/22/2015 c1 5dramioneshipper1999
Great poem. I felt pretty identified with it because at some point in your life you just realize that if you don't love yourself, you can love no one. You cannot really love if you have not learned to love yourself, because then if you are in a relationship you are trying to get your partener to love you so that you can somehow through that external love, love yourself. And that's just not how it works.
9/14/2015 c1 36waad
Oh. I love the first stanza. It's so relatable, and I understand it so much. I love it, and I love how you followed it up with the rest where the fear edges out slowly, and then you reach the last three words. And, finally.
9/2/2015 c1 63yanz
I've been in that position. I like the way you describe it as your "core", I haven't thought about it in those terms before. The whole poem flows beautifully, and the emphasis on "love you back" at the end was a nice touch.
8/6/2015 c1 97rust phoenix
i really like the message of this poem. i've been in this situation and you portray it insightfully.

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