for New Orleans4/23/2021 c1 PatGo
I really enjoyed reading your book. This deserves a lot of audience. Why don't you publish it in NovelStar?And they also have an on-going competition that you might want to join.
I really enjoyed reading your book. This deserves a lot of audience. Why don't you publish it in NovelStar?And they also have an on-going competition that you might want to join.
1/30/2017 c2 
5marzmez
This story has promise! And I just know that as soon as I see a line like "return to normal" I just know its never gonna happen. The question is "how?"
5marzmezThis story has promise! And I just know that as soon as I see a line like "return to normal" I just know its never gonna happen. The question is "how?"
12/11/2016 c2 Mrs. Awesomesauceness
I think this story has a really cool plot. I hope you can keep it going. It definitely feels realistic.
I think this story has a really cool plot. I hope you can keep it going. It definitely feels realistic.
5/11/2016 c2 1Du
I love this! It is so good and it has so much potential still. Thank you for writing long chapters, I adore them. Please keep writing!
PS: just as a side note, I love the names Juliette and Dara. Hehe
1DuI love this! It is so good and it has so much potential still. Thank you for writing long chapters, I adore them. Please keep writing!
PS: just as a side note, I love the names Juliette and Dara. Hehe
8/21/2015 c1 2Yannick
Liking it already (':
Have to admit, clicked on the title because I was looking specifically for something a little more cliché and 'mindless mush-y' which may or may not come as a shock/insult to you - I hope not.
But it's well written, and flows nicely. So far the premise is... well, as intriguing as a typical romance story line could be, but I'm hoping for great character development and a natural chemistry between the two.
Not sure I enjoyed the last part where our otherwise competent and extremely down-to-earth heroine becomes a bumbling fool, but can't change what's been done.
Looking forward to the rest and finding out more about her story of how she came to be in her position.
2YannickLiking it already (':
Have to admit, clicked on the title because I was looking specifically for something a little more cliché and 'mindless mush-y' which may or may not come as a shock/insult to you - I hope not.
But it's well written, and flows nicely. So far the premise is... well, as intriguing as a typical romance story line could be, but I'm hoping for great character development and a natural chemistry between the two.
Not sure I enjoyed the last part where our otherwise competent and extremely down-to-earth heroine becomes a bumbling fool, but can't change what's been done.
Looking forward to the rest and finding out more about her story of how she came to be in her position.
8/17/2015 c1 Akiyume
This seems like a great start to a new story with a interesting back story. I'm already intrigued by the main character and how she went from astrophysics to film. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
This seems like a great start to a new story with a interesting back story. I'm already intrigued by the main character and how she went from astrophysics to film. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
8/7/2015 c1 72898
Interesting...Excited to read more! Question: Were all the J names intentional?
Interesting...Excited to read more! Question: Were all the J names intentional?
8/7/2015 c1 1MysteriousNerdness-07
Well written, entertaining, awesome! I can relate to Juliette in her awkwardness especially the "Dogs are cool" line–which is something I'd probably say in that situation. Write on.
1MysteriousNerdness-07Well written, entertaining, awesome! I can relate to Juliette in her awkwardness especially the "Dogs are cool" line–which is something I'd probably say in that situation. Write on.