for Walk of Life3/20/2022 c9 Guest
Fun y enough I have read this before and you know how I remember is the bathroom scene ha ha I t’embêter faintly something with the shower and fire and water draining ! Must be because that doesn’t seem to exist where I live and modern times are different now. Anyway I think they’ve been followe but I am not sure how! It’s nice to see them open up to each smother and he’s more talkative too
Fun y enough I have read this before and you know how I remember is the bathroom scene ha ha I t’embêter faintly something with the shower and fire and water draining ! Must be because that doesn’t seem to exist where I live and modern times are different now. Anyway I think they’ve been followe but I am not sure how! It’s nice to see them open up to each smother and he’s more talkative too
3/20/2022 c7 Guest
Hello it’s me again. I’ve been reading when I can. He’s much more human like now and he’s good to see them open up. I wonder what her crimes were but I bet rheee was a reason since I don’t think she’s a serial killer. Anyway looking forward to more story soon
Hello it’s me again. I’ve been reading when I can. He’s much more human like now and he’s good to see them open up. I wonder what her crimes were but I bet rheee was a reason since I don’t think she’s a serial killer. Anyway looking forward to more story soon
3/18/2022 c4 Guest
Very interesting if he’s contracted to go after his own same kind of people. I wonder how this will turn out and the movie I think of is no country for good men or old country for good men can’t remember although I’m not sure he was under contract
Very interesting if he’s contracted to go after his own same kind of people. I wonder how this will turn out and the movie I think of is no country for good men or old country for good men can’t remember although I’m not sure he was under contract
3/18/2022 c2 Guest
Hello it’s me again. Yes I have jumped to a new story of yours ha ha. I usually read multiple stories at a time or when I need a break from one. Anyway I love how descriptive your stories are. I can see it playing out like a movie in my head. I could’ve sworn I read this one before but I don’t quite remember. Anyway looking forward to this
Hello it’s me again. Yes I have jumped to a new story of yours ha ha. I usually read multiple stories at a time or when I need a break from one. Anyway I love how descriptive your stories are. I can see it playing out like a movie in my head. I could’ve sworn I read this one before but I don’t quite remember. Anyway looking forward to this
8/12/2020 c2 Shailaputri
This is dark..It is captivating I agree. But I can't feel what the characters feel in this story. The innocent teenage boy was killed by Luther just because he was trying to help Jo. But still Jo ends up for Luther. I just don't understand it. Basically my understanding is killing for protecting oneself and for protecting their nation and for protecting others is Ok. Killing out of vengeance is something punishable but yet understandable. But killing someone just for money is cannibalistic. There is nothing humanity in it. Then how come such character feels love and loneliness which are related to human beings. ? I just don't understand. The assassins might have animistic needs not something like love I think.
This is dark..It is captivating I agree. But I can't feel what the characters feel in this story. The innocent teenage boy was killed by Luther just because he was trying to help Jo. But still Jo ends up for Luther. I just don't understand it. Basically my understanding is killing for protecting oneself and for protecting their nation and for protecting others is Ok. Killing out of vengeance is something punishable but yet understandable. But killing someone just for money is cannibalistic. There is nothing humanity in it. Then how come such character feels love and loneliness which are related to human beings. ? I just don't understand. The assassins might have animistic needs not something like love I think.
12/3/2019 c25 augmentedDREAMS
Oh, I just went through the reviews and third is a rewrite! Makes much more sense.
Regardless, I still love it. I would give one criticism tho. That the end, it didn't feel characteristic of Luther to not notice the gun in Callahan's hand and that teamed with the quick end for him felt dismissive for his character.
Oh, I just went through the reviews and third is a rewrite! Makes much more sense.
Regardless, I still love it. I would give one criticism tho. That the end, it didn't feel characteristic of Luther to not notice the gun in Callahan's hand and that teamed with the quick end for him felt dismissive for his character.
12/3/2019 c26 augmentedDREAMS
This was an amazing read. The ending was heartbreaking but I still appreciate it. It is the ending tho, right? Because I'm confused as there is no completed tag. If it isn't, I eagerly await the next chapter. I came back to this story after a long time, and it's an even better read this time.
I could've sworn that the ending was different back then. But maybe I'm just confusing it with something else. Regardless, love your work! It's insane! Characters and dialogues are so well thought out and the situations they are put are stimulating and intriguing. Jo and Luther are two of my favourite characters ever. I will miss them.
This was an amazing read. The ending was heartbreaking but I still appreciate it. It is the ending tho, right? Because I'm confused as there is no completed tag. If it isn't, I eagerly await the next chapter. I came back to this story after a long time, and it's an even better read this time.
I could've sworn that the ending was different back then. But maybe I'm just confusing it with something else. Regardless, love your work! It's insane! Characters and dialogues are so well thought out and the situations they are put are stimulating and intriguing. Jo and Luther are two of my favourite characters ever. I will miss them.
1/11/2019 c26 zagato
This is sad but beautiful. The end is like the movie with Aaron Paul, Come and Find Me. Thank you!
This is sad but beautiful. The end is like the movie with Aaron Paul, Come and Find Me. Thank you!
1/11/2019 c11 zagato
This is a cool story. I use Google Maps to see the cities in this story. Maybe they're going to Atlanta where Jo read about th unsolved murders. Thank you!
This is a cool story. I use Google Maps to see the cities in this story. Maybe they're going to Atlanta where Jo read about th unsolved murders. Thank you!
3/20/2018 c26 Amelie
Is that the end? Kinda expected that chapter to happen
Is that the end? Kinda expected that chapter to happen
3/17/2018 c26 Danielle
Just know I’ve waited all day for this site to start working so I could finally read this. If this is where it ends, I understand. The optimist in me hopes it isn’t and that there will be a happier ending. Not a happy ending, per se, but a happier one. Perhaps even bittersweet, though I guess this ending kind of is bittersweet, just a little more bitter than sweet. With all that said, I did enjoy this chapter. I’m still going to hold out hope for more, but this chapter makes an excellent ending as well. It’s tragic, but that’s kind of how life has always been for Jo and Luther.
One more thing, thank you so much for sharing this amazing story. I think it’s probably my favorite one on this site. If I could rank my favorites, this one would definitely be number one.
–Danielle Pokorny (still can’t leave an official signed review because of the site’s policies on multiple reviews per numbered chapter)
Just know I’ve waited all day for this site to start working so I could finally read this. If this is where it ends, I understand. The optimist in me hopes it isn’t and that there will be a happier ending. Not a happy ending, per se, but a happier one. Perhaps even bittersweet, though I guess this ending kind of is bittersweet, just a little more bitter than sweet. With all that said, I did enjoy this chapter. I’m still going to hold out hope for more, but this chapter makes an excellent ending as well. It’s tragic, but that’s kind of how life has always been for Jo and Luther.
One more thing, thank you so much for sharing this amazing story. I think it’s probably my favorite one on this site. If I could rank my favorites, this one would definitely be number one.
–Danielle Pokorny (still can’t leave an official signed review because of the site’s policies on multiple reviews per numbered chapter)
3/12/2018 c25 Danielle
That was sickening to read. I had an idea of what was going to happen, but it still made my stomach churn. The day Callahan dies can’t come soon enough! Hopefully before Jo loses her own sanity.
I really wish that this damn website would let me login and leave a review, but again I can’t since it seems I’ve already reviewed this number of chapter when it was first posted a few years ago. The chapter 25 now is a whole different chapter than the one of before, yet I can’t submit a logged review. Oh well. I just wanted you to I wasn’t being too lazy to login. I just can’t leave signed reviews for chapters I’ve already reviewed.
–Danielle Pokorny
That was sickening to read. I had an idea of what was going to happen, but it still made my stomach churn. The day Callahan dies can’t come soon enough! Hopefully before Jo loses her own sanity.
I really wish that this damn website would let me login and leave a review, but again I can’t since it seems I’ve already reviewed this number of chapter when it was first posted a few years ago. The chapter 25 now is a whole different chapter than the one of before, yet I can’t submit a logged review. Oh well. I just wanted you to I wasn’t being too lazy to login. I just can’t leave signed reviews for chapters I’ve already reviewed.
–Danielle Pokorny
3/8/2018 c24 Danielle P
Luther’s killed quite a number of innocent people in front of and because of Jo so I don’t understand how Callahan telling her all these things about Luther should really make that much of a difference in the way she views Luther. She’s already pretty aware of the kind of man he is and has witnessed it first-hand so I wouldn’t doubt she has an idea of what he’s capable of. She and Luther even talked a little bit about his morality so she knows Luther is in his right mind and aware of what he’s doing when he kills people. However, Jo also knows that he spared her because he saw something in her, something he too felt, loneliness. He empathized with her and formed an attachment to her. Even when she’d given him reasons to kill her, he could never bring himself to do anything more than threaten her. That tells me he’s not the complete monster Callahan is trying to convince Jo he is. Is Luther mostly a terrible person? Probably. Even earlier on, what small acts of kindness he did show her were rather warped and not exactly selfless, but that doesn’t mean he’s completely incapable of good. Jo knows this. Jo knows that despite all of the horrible things Luther is and all the monstrosities he commits, at the end of the day, he cares enough for her to give himself to Callahan if it means there’s the possibility of saving her life. What Luther is to the rest of the world doesn’t matter, just what he is to her and what she is to him.
Weird story, I had a dream about this story last night–well, Callahan and his DeVille, though it was canary yellow in my dream–so you can imagine my surprise and excitement when I woke up this morning to an email alert telling me that you’d updated the story.
Luther’s killed quite a number of innocent people in front of and because of Jo so I don’t understand how Callahan telling her all these things about Luther should really make that much of a difference in the way she views Luther. She’s already pretty aware of the kind of man he is and has witnessed it first-hand so I wouldn’t doubt she has an idea of what he’s capable of. She and Luther even talked a little bit about his morality so she knows Luther is in his right mind and aware of what he’s doing when he kills people. However, Jo also knows that he spared her because he saw something in her, something he too felt, loneliness. He empathized with her and formed an attachment to her. Even when she’d given him reasons to kill her, he could never bring himself to do anything more than threaten her. That tells me he’s not the complete monster Callahan is trying to convince Jo he is. Is Luther mostly a terrible person? Probably. Even earlier on, what small acts of kindness he did show her were rather warped and not exactly selfless, but that doesn’t mean he’s completely incapable of good. Jo knows this. Jo knows that despite all of the horrible things Luther is and all the monstrosities he commits, at the end of the day, he cares enough for her to give himself to Callahan if it means there’s the possibility of saving her life. What Luther is to the rest of the world doesn’t matter, just what he is to her and what she is to him.
Weird story, I had a dream about this story last night–well, Callahan and his DeVille, though it was canary yellow in my dream–so you can imagine my surprise and excitement when I woke up this morning to an email alert telling me that you’d updated the story.