
10/12/2015 c31 Guest 1- Grace
Is This The End? Well, This Book Has Been Wonderful So Far. Thank You.
Is This The End? Well, This Book Has Been Wonderful So Far. Thank You.
10/5/2015 c31 Elle Poko
Well, this bittersweet for me. Sweet for the happy, and bitter because I'm sad to see this story end. However, it had to end somewhere, and I can't think of a more perfect ending than the one given.
Well, this bittersweet for me. Sweet for the happy, and bitter because I'm sad to see this story end. However, it had to end somewhere, and I can't think of a more perfect ending than the one given.
10/3/2015 c31 Guest
YES. I'm satisfied now. You don't have to finish this story. I consider this to be my happy ending! Hahahah
YES. I'm satisfied now. You don't have to finish this story. I consider this to be my happy ending! Hahahah
10/3/2015 c30 Akiyume
Please please please don't let Jo be dead. That would tear my heart in two.
On a brighter note, excellent chapter, as usual. There could have been more suspense, although the very clinical atmosphere of execution also really suited Luther at the moment. I wonder who's driving the truck at the end.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Please please please don't let Jo be dead. That would tear my heart in two.
On a brighter note, excellent chapter, as usual. There could have been more suspense, although the very clinical atmosphere of execution also really suited Luther at the moment. I wonder who's driving the truck at the end.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
10/2/2015 c30 Guest
Wow. I know I pleaded with a faster update, but now I'm sad that it came. It wasn't relieving at all to know that Jo wasn't really in this chapter. It didnt even feel satisfying to see that stupid jerk die. I don't want this story to end on a sad note...
Wow. I know I pleaded with a faster update, but now I'm sad that it came. It wasn't relieving at all to know that Jo wasn't really in this chapter. It didnt even feel satisfying to see that stupid jerk die. I don't want this story to end on a sad note...
10/2/2015 c30 smrae
Wow that is definitely how to handle business! So well written! You write the action sequences so well. I'm heartbroken for Luther and Jo! Talk about star crossed lovers. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Wow that is definitely how to handle business! So well written! You write the action sequences so well. I'm heartbroken for Luther and Jo! Talk about star crossed lovers. Can't wait for the next chapter.
10/2/2015 c30 Guest 1- Grace
Thank God, Callahan Is Dead And I Hope Jo Didn't Die.
Thank God, Callahan Is Dead And I Hope Jo Didn't Die.
10/2/2015 c29 TMSantos
Totally unexpected.
And I love how death was portrayed as a beach, considering that's what she wanted when she retired... And she is, in a way, retiring.
Nice.
Totally unexpected.
And I love how death was portrayed as a beach, considering that's what she wanted when she retired... And she is, in a way, retiring.
Nice.
10/1/2015 c29 Guest 1- Grace
I Hope Jo Would Survive It.
I Hope Jo Would Survive It.
10/1/2015 c29 Guest
WHAT. NO. WHY. This should not happen. People should not leave cliffhangers and assume we'll be okay until the next update. I can't believe how sudden this was! I didn't expect Reichert to come after them. I mean, I was expecting some drama, but NOT. THIS.
PLEASE. Just fix this. And soon :(
WHAT. NO. WHY. This should not happen. People should not leave cliffhangers and assume we'll be okay until the next update. I can't believe how sudden this was! I didn't expect Reichert to come after them. I mean, I was expecting some drama, but NOT. THIS.
PLEASE. Just fix this. And soon :(
9/27/2015 c28 Guest 1- Grace
Luther Hited Her? Wow! Nice Chapter.
Luther Hited Her? Wow! Nice Chapter.
9/24/2015 c27 Elle Poko
Chapters like this make me almost forget how dangerous things are about to get — the key word here being 'almost'. It kind of makes me worried about how serious things are going to get.
Chapters like this make me almost forget how dangerous things are about to get — the key word here being 'almost'. It kind of makes me worried about how serious things are going to get.
9/21/2015 c26 Elle Poko
I'm somewhat baffled as to why she's shocked that he enjoys killing. He did tell her something to that effect earlier on.
I'm somewhat baffled as to why she's shocked that he enjoys killing. He did tell her something to that effect earlier on.