for For my Roommate's Boyfriend11/1/2015 c1 
11theweekendpoetry
This is soooo sad :( I hope he realizes that you deserve him more than your roommate does, just like what happened in Taylor Swift's You Belong With Me.
Also, just a few minor corrections:
Roommate's Boyfriend
Tantrums not tandrums
Thank you!
11theweekendpoetryThis is soooo sad :( I hope he realizes that you deserve him more than your roommate does, just like what happened in Taylor Swift's You Belong With Me.
Also, just a few minor corrections:
Roommate's Boyfriend
Tantrums not tandrums
Thank you!
9/11/2015 c1 11theonlykairez
Those last four lines are very powerful, almost bringing me to tears. This is very good, thank you for sharing.
11theonlykairezThose last four lines are very powerful, almost bringing me to tears. This is very good, thank you for sharing.
9/4/2015 c1 6Carmel March
Wow, loved it. What I think I liked most was how relatable this is. I think we've all liked a friend who will never look at you that way. That feeling of knowing you'd be great together but they don't notice it comes across so well in this. I also liked the structure, it flowed and was very poignant. The only thing I saw was tiny: it should be "advice" (noun) instead of "advise" (verb). Great job! :)
6Carmel MarchWow, loved it. What I think I liked most was how relatable this is. I think we've all liked a friend who will never look at you that way. That feeling of knowing you'd be great together but they don't notice it comes across so well in this. I also liked the structure, it flowed and was very poignant. The only thing I saw was tiny: it should be "advice" (noun) instead of "advise" (verb). Great job! :)