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9/21/2015 c1 4devyntheauthor
This really brought home to me the terrifying nature of beauty. The idea of something so beautiful that it is horror to look upon is really interesting. It's down-right something out of myths, fused with weird fiction. Absolutely great.

If I had one criticism it would be that I feel you repeat that "they" are tired of how we profaned them. I know this is flash fiction, but it felt a little redundant and I think you could better show us how they did it with a quick example or metaphor of some sort.

But that last paragraph was beautiful and terrifying.
9/17/2015 c1 4Kurthulhu
Very nice. Faeries are not fun. I like this a lot!

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