for Karma6/11/2017 c14 Shiguresan NSI
I've read Frost and this one and I just love them both! You have such an imagination and have created such an engrossing world with your words and your imagery. It is addictive! Also I must confess I was a bit scared at the beginning because I am a sucker for a happy ending and was so thrilled with the conclusion. Lovely to see Henry and Haomath again as well as to meet Wolfgan and Geoffrey. Please never stop writing you're so talented and every time I read these again it fills me with excitement for more! Thank you so much for sharing these with us I will definitely read whatever you offer up next!
I've read Frost and this one and I just love them both! You have such an imagination and have created such an engrossing world with your words and your imagery. It is addictive! Also I must confess I was a bit scared at the beginning because I am a sucker for a happy ending and was so thrilled with the conclusion. Lovely to see Henry and Haomath again as well as to meet Wolfgan and Geoffrey. Please never stop writing you're so talented and every time I read these again it fills me with excitement for more! Thank you so much for sharing these with us I will definitely read whatever you offer up next!
6/2/2017 c2 Black Violin Prince
Whoa, I actually really liked how that turned out because damn, man, it was pretty intense. Not quite hour and heated yet. But I'm loving this.
~Black VP
Whoa, I actually really liked how that turned out because damn, man, it was pretty intense. Not quite hour and heated yet. But I'm loving this.
~Black VP
6/2/2017 c1 Black Violin Prince
This story's sounding amazing. Can't wait to read the rest of it.
~Black VP
This story's sounding amazing. Can't wait to read the rest of it.
~Black VP
5/25/2017 c14 havreflarn
Awwww, this was such a sweet ending! Thank you very much for that :)
I loved how Wolfgan came immediately to get Geoffrey and how he didn't have any hard feelings for him being so stubborn in the first place! I mean Wolfgan could have teased him much more, could have bathed in his victory or something, but I really loved that he knew how hard this was for his husband and didn't. So sweet!
And also I laughed so hard about the scene with the carriage, this was really awesome. How nobody made fun of the fragile elf and how they tried to even please him more by throwing in the mattress and blanket, looking for his approval :D really loved this. I can see it in my head, the big, bad ass hullians bending themselves for any sign of approval from the little elf :D :D :D
You sure, you don't want to write an epilogue? *hopeful look*
Awwww, this was such a sweet ending! Thank you very much for that :)
I loved how Wolfgan came immediately to get Geoffrey and how he didn't have any hard feelings for him being so stubborn in the first place! I mean Wolfgan could have teased him much more, could have bathed in his victory or something, but I really loved that he knew how hard this was for his husband and didn't. So sweet!
And also I laughed so hard about the scene with the carriage, this was really awesome. How nobody made fun of the fragile elf and how they tried to even please him more by throwing in the mattress and blanket, looking for his approval :D really loved this. I can see it in my head, the big, bad ass hullians bending themselves for any sign of approval from the little elf :D :D :D
You sure, you don't want to write an epilogue? *hopeful look*
5/24/2017 c14 
3Fryvi
Happy ending, yeey!
There might have been some mistakes, but not enough for me to realize English is your second language. But then again, it's my second language too x)
Thank you for this story. I enjoyed it very much!
3FryviHappy ending, yeey!
There might have been some mistakes, but not enough for me to realize English is your second language. But then again, it's my second language too x)
Thank you for this story. I enjoyed it very much!
5/23/2017 c14 4Atomicpuffin
*applause* now knowing that English is your second language I'm very impressed. Grammar is already hard for those of us whose language is English so the fact that it's not yours and the story was still easy to read even through the mistakes is something to be very proud of. I loved this story as the characters were very compatible and played off each other well. I'm happy with the ending even if I'm sad to see it end. If your next story is anything like this I'm definitely looking forward to it. Great job and thank you for a sweet love story that tugged at my heart and fed into my romantic soul. Good luck and happy writing.
4Atomicpuffin*applause* now knowing that English is your second language I'm very impressed. Grammar is already hard for those of us whose language is English so the fact that it's not yours and the story was still easy to read even through the mistakes is something to be very proud of. I loved this story as the characters were very compatible and played off each other well. I'm happy with the ending even if I'm sad to see it end. If your next story is anything like this I'm definitely looking forward to it. Great job and thank you for a sweet love story that tugged at my heart and fed into my romantic soul. Good luck and happy writing.
5/16/2017 c13 4Atomicpuffin
So happy to see an update. I'm falling in love with these two n I can't wait to see what comes next
4AtomicpuffinSo happy to see an update. I'm falling in love with these two n I can't wait to see what comes next
5/2/2017 c11 Guest
Type your review my God ,they are going to sorry they ever messed with Wolfgang and his family I can't wait can you please let him make them suffer (hehehehehehe! evil laugh ,its mine by the way hehehe)
Type your review my God ,they are going to sorry they ever messed with Wolfgang and his family I can't wait can you please let him make them suffer (hehehehehehe! evil laugh ,its mine by the way hehehe)
4/24/2017 c9 Havreflarn
Woah, I'm so glad you're back! I think this was your best chapter, it was really perfect. I had to reread some of the other chapters to get back into the story, but this one really was the best. So much feeling, the scenes beautifully written - I was really able to feel and see everything you described.
And then the twist of the last part, Geoffreys thoughts - this sounds like really heavy stuff is going on in Geoffreys head. He isn't just stubborn or nasty. This might give your story some other twist, too and I really love this tension you just created there. Please, keep going!
Woah, I'm so glad you're back! I think this was your best chapter, it was really perfect. I had to reread some of the other chapters to get back into the story, but this one really was the best. So much feeling, the scenes beautifully written - I was really able to feel and see everything you described.
And then the twist of the last part, Geoffreys thoughts - this sounds like really heavy stuff is going on in Geoffreys head. He isn't just stubborn or nasty. This might give your story some other twist, too and I really love this tension you just created there. Please, keep going!
4/22/2017 c9 Fryvi
Yeey new chapter :D :D
I had to go back and reread to know remember what was going on xD
But gaaah, such communication issues between them!
Yeey new chapter :D :D
I had to go back and reread to know remember what was going on xD
But gaaah, such communication issues between them!
2/9/2017 c8 Guest
This is really good. Update soon ? :)
This is really good. Update soon ? :)
4/24/2016 c8 passionlessfool
This is such a great story. I am so glad I found it. Please update soon, and thank you for writing it.
This is such a great story. I am so glad I found it. Please update soon, and thank you for writing it.