
1/11/2022 c8 aliziahnoor
Hi, I really like with the story even I'm not finished yet. But I can feel that you have great writing skill. anyway I want to give you an offer, but may I know your mailing acc? I will be glad that we can talk it at mail. Thanks
Hi, I really like with the story even I'm not finished yet. But I can feel that you have great writing skill. anyway I want to give you an offer, but may I know your mailing acc? I will be glad that we can talk it at mail. Thanks
8/29/2020 c65
7IcanzIIravor
Great story. This was a good chapter. This is the best way for their reunion. Glad it fit Finch to a tee.
Are you experiencing writer's block?

Great story. This was a good chapter. This is the best way for their reunion. Glad it fit Finch to a tee.
Are you experiencing writer's block?
3/8/2019 c65 The Age of Awesomeness
Aww, that’s alright! It was amazing, and I’m sure everyone who reads it will think that too!
Aww, that’s alright! It was amazing, and I’m sure everyone who reads it will think that too!
2/17/2019 c65 Guest
Loved it loved every minute of it
Loved it loved every minute of it
1/16/2019 c65 Guest
Good while it lasted!
Good while it lasted!
1/15/2019 c21 Guest
Can't talk, bing reading right now.
Can't talk, bing reading right now.
1/9/2019 c65 Guest
Hey! Please update new chapters
Hey! Please update new chapters
1/6/2019 c65 Nagi
Aw man! So its discontinued?! such a good story to be dropped
Aw man! So its discontinued?! such a good story to be dropped
4/30/2018 c42 Guest
.. no updates? I've been enjoying it though! thanks for uploading
.. no updates? I've been enjoying it though! thanks for uploading
1/22/2018 c70 Victoria
Loved your ideas for the first book. Thanks for getting back to the story.
Loved your ideas for the first book. Thanks for getting back to the story.
1/21/2018 c70 The Age of Awesomeness
Wow! I hope you can get it published soon! I’ll be on the lookout for A Curious Mask! I’m most certainly going to support you, and this book! (And the sequels! I don’t mind the sequels for this story!)
Wow! I hope you can get it published soon! I’ll be on the lookout for A Curious Mask! I’m most certainly going to support you, and this book! (And the sequels! I don’t mind the sequels for this story!)
11/15/2017 c69 The Age of Awesomeness
This is quite an amazing story! You certainly have a good plot, some good character development, and good grammar and spelling! I would love to see more of this story, simply because it is an amazing story.
One of the things I find amazingly well done in this story is the peculiarity of Finch’s line of thought. It’s outside of the box, and most certainly unique. I got a feeling that, when you were introducing Finch, you wanted him to be alien to the readers and hard to relate and feel empathy for. You’ve succeeded in doing that, even if it was unintentional. It took me probably half of what you have written on here to begin to sympathize with Finch and adjust to his thought patterns.
Also, I quite enjoyed the questions at the end of the chapters, from Finch or another character. They added a little flare!
I wish you luck in accomplishing your goal of writing backstory for Chaos! I hope you’ll be able to update soon, because I can’t wait to see more of this story!
This is quite an amazing story! You certainly have a good plot, some good character development, and good grammar and spelling! I would love to see more of this story, simply because it is an amazing story.
One of the things I find amazingly well done in this story is the peculiarity of Finch’s line of thought. It’s outside of the box, and most certainly unique. I got a feeling that, when you were introducing Finch, you wanted him to be alien to the readers and hard to relate and feel empathy for. You’ve succeeded in doing that, even if it was unintentional. It took me probably half of what you have written on here to begin to sympathize with Finch and adjust to his thought patterns.
Also, I quite enjoyed the questions at the end of the chapters, from Finch or another character. They added a little flare!
I wish you luck in accomplishing your goal of writing backstory for Chaos! I hope you’ll be able to update soon, because I can’t wait to see more of this story!
6/23/2017 c69 Taos
Congratulations man. And this story is already close to a masterpiece. You shouldn't have trouble getting it there.
Congratulations man. And this story is already close to a masterpiece. You shouldn't have trouble getting it there.
5/25/2017 c1 Guest
I really enjoyed the story to the end. Being so long I thought it was complete. But thankfully Finch is recovering... please continue and elaborate more about the desert!
I really enjoyed the story to the end. Being so long I thought it was complete. But thankfully Finch is recovering... please continue and elaborate more about the desert!