
12/1/2015 c1
12DanaWolfStudios
Wow, that was beautifly written and deviously criptique. I loved it. Im not quite sure what was happening at some points but I guess that was sort off the point?
All in all, there was a nice atmosphere in your story, and it has the originality that I always look for in creepy stories.
Again, it would be nice if i could tell a little more what was going on but nevertheless i can't wait to read more of your stories. :)

Wow, that was beautifly written and deviously criptique. I loved it. Im not quite sure what was happening at some points but I guess that was sort off the point?
All in all, there was a nice atmosphere in your story, and it has the originality that I always look for in creepy stories.
Again, it would be nice if i could tell a little more what was going on but nevertheless i can't wait to read more of your stories. :)