for Eternal Craving4/26/2016 c25 mgaa
ooohhh...so this is like the after credit part of the movies where they show the next movie is going...I literally stopped coz this was the last chapter and it was just getting better and better...thank you for continuing this series...looking forward to the next...until next time
ooohhh...so this is like the after credit part of the movies where they show the next movie is going...I literally stopped coz this was the last chapter and it was just getting better and better...thank you for continuing this series...looking forward to the next...until next time
4/23/2016 c25 slcjnk2008
Wow I wasn't expecting this story to be wrapped up quite so soon but it is a good segway Into the next story. I'm looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us but I'm excited to see how Marek handles his dual role and what's going on with Nicholas.
Wow I wasn't expecting this story to be wrapped up quite so soon but it is a good segway Into the next story. I'm looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us but I'm excited to see how Marek handles his dual role and what's going on with Nicholas.
4/23/2016 c25 
18Moonvibe
This was the chapter I've been waiting for! ;) And it didn't disappoint in the least.
It seems that no matter Marek's intentions he must always resort to methods he struggles to avoid. It does feel like Fate is pushing him around, forcing him into decisions he doesn't want to make. The confrontation with Feinman was a gripping showdown between opposing forces. Neither Marek nor the Guild leader was backing down and that made for some intense and calculated moves on both their parts. Unfortunately for Feinman he forfeited his chance at surviving when he struck Marek's core.
Feinman was obviously very well and deeply connected. Perhaps now Marek will be able to uncover some of those sources since he's absorbed the arrogant Guild leader's essence. No doubt Marek's move will become a pivotal one, but for a character trying to step out of the grey area of morality into a more noble path, he's in a real pickle. ;)
Nicholas was meant to be a ruthless henchman. Lol. He relished the role and it helped make this chapter great. Poor Marek has to tolerate so much from his vampire accomplice. He is so far removed from Pan's influence now that I fear Nicholas is dangerously close to becoming completely unleashed, and from the looks of it that means he's gonna get sloppy in more ways than one. ;)
And that demon seal raises the stakes a bit too. Marek may end up with all kinds of leverage, but how he plays his hand will ultimately decide his fate, and perhaps that of several others too. This was a witty, exciting, and fun chapter and a compelling end to this current book. Well done and congrats on completing another marvelous installment in your Eternal Series!
I look forward to all that the future holds for these characters and their ever expanding stories. This book gave us another wonderfully indelible character in Megan while continuing to flesh out so much more of the existing cast. Feinman was fun too, as short lived as his role was. ;) Just a phenomenal job of writing and storytelling all around. :)
18MoonvibeThis was the chapter I've been waiting for! ;) And it didn't disappoint in the least.
It seems that no matter Marek's intentions he must always resort to methods he struggles to avoid. It does feel like Fate is pushing him around, forcing him into decisions he doesn't want to make. The confrontation with Feinman was a gripping showdown between opposing forces. Neither Marek nor the Guild leader was backing down and that made for some intense and calculated moves on both their parts. Unfortunately for Feinman he forfeited his chance at surviving when he struck Marek's core.
Feinman was obviously very well and deeply connected. Perhaps now Marek will be able to uncover some of those sources since he's absorbed the arrogant Guild leader's essence. No doubt Marek's move will become a pivotal one, but for a character trying to step out of the grey area of morality into a more noble path, he's in a real pickle. ;)
Nicholas was meant to be a ruthless henchman. Lol. He relished the role and it helped make this chapter great. Poor Marek has to tolerate so much from his vampire accomplice. He is so far removed from Pan's influence now that I fear Nicholas is dangerously close to becoming completely unleashed, and from the looks of it that means he's gonna get sloppy in more ways than one. ;)
And that demon seal raises the stakes a bit too. Marek may end up with all kinds of leverage, but how he plays his hand will ultimately decide his fate, and perhaps that of several others too. This was a witty, exciting, and fun chapter and a compelling end to this current book. Well done and congrats on completing another marvelous installment in your Eternal Series!
I look forward to all that the future holds for these characters and their ever expanding stories. This book gave us another wonderfully indelible character in Megan while continuing to flesh out so much more of the existing cast. Feinman was fun too, as short lived as his role was. ;) Just a phenomenal job of writing and storytelling all around. :)
4/19/2016 c24 slcjnk2008
It's driving me crazy not knowing who this master is. I can actually feel Sebastian's frustration. And are Hawke, Nicolas and Sebastian related? I also love Ariel and was touched when Gustav got to hold his wife Debra again. That was so sweet.
It's driving me crazy not knowing who this master is. I can actually feel Sebastian's frustration. And are Hawke, Nicolas and Sebastian related? I also love Ariel and was touched when Gustav got to hold his wife Debra again. That was so sweet.
4/19/2016 c24 Moonvibe
Whoa! I wasn't suspecting a visit from Debra! That was a very poignant occurrence and one that not only showcased Paige's new and improved powers, but also reminded those lucky enough to be Mated to cherish those Mates. Gustav's emotional reunion was so heartfelt and really very moving. Nicely done. I liked how it affected Marek too. That was an insightful touch to his character.
Paige's enhanced abilities could open up all kinds of possibilities in the future. The full range of her powers was explained very well in this chapter and can make her an even more intriguing character. It may be Riley who is surrounded in more intrigue though. ;) It seems there may be great plans for him and his destiny. Like his momma, he is a very unique being.
And I loved how you wove a little bit of the Master into this chapter. His presence becomes even more foreboding with these unsettling letters, and that was a very clever reveal about Hawke with his letter. ;) It does make me supremely curious as to what the Master had to say to his other Vampire offspring though. That guy is creepy and sinister for sure, and his shadowy stalking and unknown identity makes his a compelling and lurking threat. It seems he wants to start pulling more strings and that can't be a good thing considering his distaste for Alaric and the Alliance.
This was another great chapter and a captivating read!
Oh, I really enjoy Megan's multi-tasking ways too. ;) Lol. And I thought the subject of her accepting Vampirism really helped to keep her character grounded too. Well done.
Whoa! I wasn't suspecting a visit from Debra! That was a very poignant occurrence and one that not only showcased Paige's new and improved powers, but also reminded those lucky enough to be Mated to cherish those Mates. Gustav's emotional reunion was so heartfelt and really very moving. Nicely done. I liked how it affected Marek too. That was an insightful touch to his character.
Paige's enhanced abilities could open up all kinds of possibilities in the future. The full range of her powers was explained very well in this chapter and can make her an even more intriguing character. It may be Riley who is surrounded in more intrigue though. ;) It seems there may be great plans for him and his destiny. Like his momma, he is a very unique being.
And I loved how you wove a little bit of the Master into this chapter. His presence becomes even more foreboding with these unsettling letters, and that was a very clever reveal about Hawke with his letter. ;) It does make me supremely curious as to what the Master had to say to his other Vampire offspring though. That guy is creepy and sinister for sure, and his shadowy stalking and unknown identity makes his a compelling and lurking threat. It seems he wants to start pulling more strings and that can't be a good thing considering his distaste for Alaric and the Alliance.
This was another great chapter and a captivating read!
Oh, I really enjoy Megan's multi-tasking ways too. ;) Lol. And I thought the subject of her accepting Vampirism really helped to keep her character grounded too. Well done.
4/18/2016 c24 Magpiesview
I'm sad to see that this story is almost over but I'm hoping there's still a bit more to come. I'm really curious about The Master and now it seems there are more of his Vampire children than we thought. Three? Could that really be true. I can't wait to find out how this plays out. Great chapter. Can't wait for more.
I'm sad to see that this story is almost over but I'm hoping there's still a bit more to come. I'm really curious about The Master and now it seems there are more of his Vampire children than we thought. Three? Could that really be true. I can't wait to find out how this plays out. Great chapter. Can't wait for more.
4/17/2016 c23 slcjnk2008
Hi there, I loved this chapter. It was so informational. I felt that it gave us a glimpse into the current situation as well as the direction that this interrelated cast of characters will soon be going. However I know that I will have to wait until you complete writing all their stories before I can see the complete and complex picture of this big wonderful world you have created. Great chapter again. - Shelley
Hi there, I loved this chapter. It was so informational. I felt that it gave us a glimpse into the current situation as well as the direction that this interrelated cast of characters will soon be going. However I know that I will have to wait until you complete writing all their stories before I can see the complete and complex picture of this big wonderful world you have created. Great chapter again. - Shelley
4/17/2016 c22 slcjnk2008
Loved seeing Grace and Tilly, they are too cute! I also thought it was very clever the way the cipher was hidden. And I loved the way Sebastian treated Alex for hugging Megan, but now I can't help but wonder what to make of the translation and what they are going to do about it. - Shelley
Loved seeing Grace and Tilly, they are too cute! I also thought it was very clever the way the cipher was hidden. And I loved the way Sebastian treated Alex for hugging Megan, but now I can't help but wonder what to make of the translation and what they are going to do about it. - Shelley
4/16/2016 c21 slcjnk2008
I love Pan and I'm so glad Nadia gave it her all to Bryce, he so deserves it. I'm sure he's going to love Siberia. But now I have to wonder if through some kind of magic, can Pan be transformed or aged into a man? I feel really bad for him. Last but not least, where is that cipher? Great chapter. - Shelley
I love Pan and I'm so glad Nadia gave it her all to Bryce, he so deserves it. I'm sure he's going to love Siberia. But now I have to wonder if through some kind of magic, can Pan be transformed or aged into a man? I feel really bad for him. Last but not least, where is that cipher? Great chapter. - Shelley
4/16/2016 c20 slcjnk2008
What can I say? They have the "hots" for each other and you write them so well. - Shelley
What can I say? They have the "hots" for each other and you write them so well. - Shelley
4/16/2016 c19 slcjnk2008
Hi there, I thought for sure that Megan would've been taken. Thank goodness for Alaric. And although I am very much a pacifist I was cheering for Sebastian to go after Brad. This was a very exciting and tension filled chapter. Yea for Alex blowing up the helicopter and I hope the boys are okay after being blown up. I now can relax somewhat again and move onto your next chapter. - Shelley
Hi there, I thought for sure that Megan would've been taken. Thank goodness for Alaric. And although I am very much a pacifist I was cheering for Sebastian to go after Brad. This was a very exciting and tension filled chapter. Yea for Alex blowing up the helicopter and I hope the boys are okay after being blown up. I now can relax somewhat again and move onto your next chapter. - Shelley
4/16/2016 c18 slcjnk2008
I loved how you wrote this entire chapter. It was so sweet and charming. The way you wrote about Sebastian and Megan's feelings for each other was just perfect. Now if only Sebastian can get Megan to safety without her putting up a fight I'll be happy. Wonderful chapter. - Shelley
I loved how you wrote this entire chapter. It was so sweet and charming. The way you wrote about Sebastian and Megan's feelings for each other was just perfect. Now if only Sebastian can get Megan to safety without her putting up a fight I'll be happy. Wonderful chapter. - Shelley
4/16/2016 c17 slcjnk2008
Hi - Things are happening fast now so I'm going onto the next chapter. Just letting you know that this chapter was so exceptionally awesome. So many questions were answered. Thanks - Shelley
Hi - Things are happening fast now so I'm going onto the next chapter. Just letting you know that this chapter was so exceptionally awesome. So many questions were answered. Thanks - Shelley
4/16/2016 c15 slcjnk2008
Hi there. It seems after reading one of your chapters I have more unanswered and lingering questions than answers which I know will come in future chapters. For example: how is Megan safe with Nadia, she has no super powers unless I missed it in previous chapters and thereby wouldn't Nadia be in just as much danger and need to rely on Dray's security team? Or who is out to harm Sebastian and why now? So now you see why I have a vested interest in your characters and story, I care about them as I read your story and want only the best for them even though they are not real. You bring them to life with your amazing writing skill, creativity and imagination. Thanks for another great chapter. - Shelley
Hi there. It seems after reading one of your chapters I have more unanswered and lingering questions than answers which I know will come in future chapters. For example: how is Megan safe with Nadia, she has no super powers unless I missed it in previous chapters and thereby wouldn't Nadia be in just as much danger and need to rely on Dray's security team? Or who is out to harm Sebastian and why now? So now you see why I have a vested interest in your characters and story, I care about them as I read your story and want only the best for them even though they are not real. You bring them to life with your amazing writing skill, creativity and imagination. Thanks for another great chapter. - Shelley
4/15/2016 c14 slcjnk2008
Hi there, I was so thrilled to see Pan bring up Bryce's obnoxious and asinine behavior towards Nadia. I don't know what you will write for Bryce's comeuppance, but I'm sure that I'm going to Iove it. I was also thrilled to see Alaric, Alex, Narayan and Saladin, they are such a large part of this wonderful family of characters you have created and I do miss them so. - Shelley
Hi there, I was so thrilled to see Pan bring up Bryce's obnoxious and asinine behavior towards Nadia. I don't know what you will write for Bryce's comeuppance, but I'm sure that I'm going to Iove it. I was also thrilled to see Alaric, Alex, Narayan and Saladin, they are such a large part of this wonderful family of characters you have created and I do miss them so. - Shelley