for Hit Me With Your Best Shot9/18/2015 c1 
2Aske Nat
I can empathize with Charlie. I probably would've punched Terry, too. What a jerk.
Nice story, though - it was quite clear that there had been previous issues, which made the characters believable. Good job!
2Aske NatI can empathize with Charlie. I probably would've punched Terry, too. What a jerk.
Nice story, though - it was quite clear that there had been previous issues, which made the characters believable. Good job!
9/18/2015 c1 43zanybellecloudo
Well, I didn't expect such a dark and realistic story to unfold. Wow. I've seen siblings fight over less... it's something about family that just presses all the wrong buttons. You told this story with clarity and skill, as if we're not mere readers but bystanders watching the whole horror unfold. Poor, poor Charlie...! Very talented work. Thanks for sharing!
43zanybellecloudoWell, I didn't expect such a dark and realistic story to unfold. Wow. I've seen siblings fight over less... it's something about family that just presses all the wrong buttons. You told this story with clarity and skill, as if we're not mere readers but bystanders watching the whole horror unfold. Poor, poor Charlie...! Very talented work. Thanks for sharing!