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I'm enjoying it! All I got to say is, Faren better not get Lor killed. I'm getting kind of an attachment to him. Which is not good. I think. I hope.
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I'm enjoying it! All I got to say is, Faren better not get Lor killed. I'm getting kind of an attachment to him. Which is not good. I think. I hope.
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5/3/2021 c1 HeyCharles
I really enjoyed reading your book. This deserves a lot of audience. Why don't you publish it in NovelStar?And they also have an on-going competition that you might want to join.
I really enjoyed reading your book. This deserves a lot of audience. Why don't you publish it in NovelStar?And they also have an on-going competition that you might want to join.
9/29/2015 c2 Awesome person
I'm enjoying it! All I got to say is, Faren better not get Lor killed. I'm getting kind of an attachment to him. Which is not good. I think. I hope.
I'm enjoying it! All I got to say is, Faren better not get Lor killed. I'm getting kind of an attachment to him. Which is not good. I think. I hope.
10/1/2015 c2 
30Black Trinity
Plot twist. Take a twisted, dark theme to the story. It's a war-themed setting right? So why not deal with the dark side of war, the psycho stuff. That beginning part portrayed the psycho thing real nice too, so... yeah that's it.
A suggestion, nothing more.
Oh, and tis been a while Inky XD
30Black TrinityPlot twist. Take a twisted, dark theme to the story. It's a war-themed setting right? So why not deal with the dark side of war, the psycho stuff. That beginning part portrayed the psycho thing real nice too, so... yeah that's it.
A suggestion, nothing more.
Oh, and tis been a while Inky XD
9/29/2015 c2 9NovemberRose1
Haha, I've been guilty of this before, but you keep calling Faren by your other characters name, Tawny. Just wanted to point that out. :-)
9NovemberRose1Haha, I've been guilty of this before, but you keep calling Faren by your other characters name, Tawny. Just wanted to point that out. :-)