for Stygmian League9/27/2015 c1 
26Zukafu Chiriamoto
Very interesting start. A few little mistakes regarding some potential misspellings and minor grammar things but that's easily sorted. Cannot wait to see how this will progress onwards - happy writing!
~ Zukafu
26Zukafu ChiriamotoVery interesting start. A few little mistakes regarding some potential misspellings and minor grammar things but that's easily sorted. Cannot wait to see how this will progress onwards - happy writing!
~ Zukafu