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9/27/2015 c1 95Lilly-Deactivated
I liked this. Just one quick note -
[the referee raised his gloved hand high above his hand.]
I think you meant:
{the referee raised his gloved hand high above his head.}
~Lilly
9/27/2015 c1 1Red-Damascus-Steel
I like your descriptions for this, I could imagine it pretty well. It was noice. You should do more if thes,,
make writing exercises out of them.

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