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1/29/2016 c3 2Wolfie the Edgelord
Whoever came up with this idea must be a genius XD. Anyway, werewolf, I would just like to note that I would like to see the rest of the original adapted
10/27/2015 c3 14The Asylum of the Devitory
It's an interesting premise, but the narrative leaves a lot to be desired. One big, big thing is show, don't tell. Readers generally don't like paragraphs of infodump. Find a way to work a description of the characters and their powers into the narrative, through actions or dialogue. Tense changes don't help smooth out the narrative either.

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